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Heat

Heat rises
\around us down
your sidewalk shimmers
and we sit
\on the porch
swimming in heat
sitting still enough 
vapor

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  1. Date: 9/28/2010 12:19:00 PM

    makes me think of so many metaphors and similes...yet you tell us none? I know you could "plump this verse up" Light & Love

  1. Date: 9/10/2010 11:22:00 PM

    nice one, enjoyed this read tonight, best wishes this weekend..P.D.