Submit a Poem
Get Your Premium Membership

I,ve unclosed

Patrick Wakefield Avatar    Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled I,ve unclosed which was written by poet Patrick Wakefield. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by Patrick Wakefield

Best Patrick Wakefield Poems

+ Fav Poet

I,ve unclosed

I,ve unclosed
                                  will speak

steeply uncrooked breathing 'gainst 
the racing moon over the valley bending
swiftly thoughts of ungiant sprigs puckish
in the frailing summers wings

a wig of tender incandescent drops cavort 
in silent wetness on petals the)

a cadence of caving murdered light
seamless fluid winsome dusting upon
the unserious lips of night flexing effortlessly
by their touch, and flaccid, upon mine
i am drugged
   of lilywhite tubes; crumbs of hushed love
a draught of limpid steam.    i

laced and foamy the jaw distends

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 9/10/2010 9:50:00 AM

    What a beautiful day to sit and read poetry here at PoetrySoup. Please keep writing and sharing your poems with us. What a diverse group of poets we have here I am so happy you are one of us Patrick although sometimes I don't get the jest of some of your poems. Have a wonderful weekend filled with inspiration. Love, Carol