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Who's Out There Still?

Purple nebula
gas insignia
finds a polished glass
astronomy class
here on earthly sod.

Pluto ice ball
now a rogue moon
White dwarfs sun fall
burnt out too soon.

Lenses peek.
comets streak.
Say to me.

You see
no God?

Odd...

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  1. Date: 10/25/2010 10:08:00 AM

    Congratulations Gerard on your win in Rick's contest. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/6/2010 6:15:00 AM

    LOL if there was "something" so large that from the matter of which it was comprised it could create a UNIVERSE do you think a or an "entity" us, could make an instrument with the ability not only to see up, into, through, out the otherside & peer backward to look at it, could be made? If it was made it would not be a telescope for that would only show the interior (some of it;) This may be called Verse/or Rhyme/ not free verse because it contains TOO much rhyme

  1. Date: 9/17/2010 12:54:00 PM

    Congratulations on this wonderful write, Gerard

  1. Date: 9/17/2010 9:10:00 AM

    A wonderful write, congratulations on your win. Caryl

  1. Date: 9/17/2010 7:50:00 AM

    nice one , congrats on your HM

  1. Date: 9/17/2010 6:49:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win Gerard in Rick Parise's contest "The Universe" Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/17/2010 12:18:00 AM

    Gerard congrats on your placement in Rick's contest :) Wilma

  1. Date: 9/16/2010 3:23:00 PM

    Congrats Gerard on your HM in the Universe contest.. a lovely piece my friend..enjoy your honor tonight with luv...

  1. Date: 9/16/2010 2:39:00 PM

    This is one of my favorites..your ended it perfectly. BG congrats.

  1. Date: 9/16/2010 1:30:00 PM

    Congratulation's Gerard on your fine win in Rick's contest >> James

  1. Date: 9/16/2010 12:58:00 PM

    You know, I heard that Pluto is now no longer considered a planet, Gerard. Scientists sometimes see things differently than the rest of us as they look through their telescopes, but I have no doubt that God created everything. Your last three lines are very thought-provoking. Congratulations on your success in Rick's contest! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 9/6/2010 6:15:00 PM

    good one , is it for the contest? good luck if so