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Can You?

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Can You?

i have many thoughts and worries that i can comprehend. 

there are things in life that we cant comprehend.

i have things going on right now that i cant comprehend (parents fighting)

                  ill say more later just wait....


*comment if you please*

                                             -Angel4eva23

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  1. Date: 5/29/2011 4:07:00 PM

    All your work is you heart and soul on paper... we write very much the same way.. That is why I love your work... Im sure there will be more gems from you that will inspire more of me.. You are a true poet...and im poud to be you friend...luv Michael

  1. Date: 9/12/2010 12:54:00 PM

    I'm liking your thoughts. It was Socrates that said "As for me, all I know is that I know nothing." My parents fought for years and it ended in a divorce. I grew up with a torn family. Now that i'm 30, mum and pops are talking to each other again. Go figure. Where was this reconciliation when it mattered? That I'll never comprehend.

  1. Date: 9/12/2010 4:24:00 AM

    Just realize their fights are not about you. Parents fight for many reasons. They themselves do not always know why they do what they do. Sometimes they are angry at themselves most of all and have no one but loved ones near, so, that's where the anger goes. Who else would take it but someone who loved them. FIND a safe happy place to go...I went to the library! Light & Love

  1. Date: 9/6/2010 12:34:00 PM

    Welcome to Poetry Soup .. enjoyed your creative write tonight... soup offers many contests on this site.. check them out and enter.. and good luck ..with luv..

  1. Date: 9/6/2010 11:41:00 AM

    Brittany, I'm a parent and I still don't comprehend things the way they should be. In reality girl we are in the same boat*luv~SKAT