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Ordinary Man

The Ordinary Man

In the kitchen where I feed, greed for you, my only need
Across the table, longing to be swept by your eyes
Like the average guy you speak of  long days
Tired and weary, not handy in bed 

Flames burned out the desire in hopes one day to return
I open the window, in hopes you feel and follow the tease
These feelings are so fustrating
I compare beyond mountains so boring

I hold back, missing your million kisses to none
Making wishes, I can't breath in my dream
A love connection ending like death
Your sex drive- gone cold, my wild sexuality ends in tears

The rage- The power - The hunger- Needs to be fed
No matter, tonight I'm setting the vibrator on high
One thing I won't deny myself, the pleasure my body needs 
Who needs the ordinary man, when I have a box full of batteries and toys!

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  1. Date: 3/19/2014 9:04:00 AM

    SKAT Its sad when a love starts to fade away, But you showed him he can be replaced and not needed. < blushing at the end part > LOL Thanks for the wonderful comment on my Fallen Hero poem.

  1. Date: 2/17/2014 3:25:00 PM

    Glad I'm no ordinary man, compared to my touch and groove a machine would just deepen the desire For the ravaging man that I am. A most motivating write. J.A.B.

  1. Date: 1/30/2014 11:28:00 PM

    This is a good poem! A man out done by a machine! Keep up the good work. -D -

  1. Date: 1/15/2014 12:08:00 PM

    Skat This is great work of a poem. And thank you for reaching out to me and for your supportive comments. Right now this is the only way I could figure out how to reach you because I could not find a way to directly respond to your comment. As you know I'm a new member and still trying to learn how to use the site. Thank you for taking the time to read my work though. Great job with this writing I really enjoyed it

  1. Date: 12/7/2013 8:06:00 PM

    Very nice and interesting work my friend.Congratulations to you, Skat.

  1. Date: 12/4/2013 12:56:00 AM

    Hi, my dearest sis & friend Skat! Stopping by here for a while to extend my biggest heartfelt congratulations on your awesome win in the contest. Big big hearty congratulations my dearest Skat! Biggest hugs! I love and enjoyed reading this stellar write of urs this pm. This is a brilliant & unique idea for the contest. Thanks for sharing! Missing again to stop by on your poetry page & my honor. Hope u & ur family is doin fine always! I'll be back to congrats the others;)) Big hugs! lovm4evrLeo

  1. Date: 12/3/2013 8:00:00 PM

    Awesome write! Congratulations to you, Skat. Thanks for your inspiring visits. Good night.

  1. Date: 12/3/2013 7:17:00 PM

    Congrats SKAT, a rather brave piece. You wrote it with a sense of humor. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 12/3/2013 7:10:00 PM

    A very intense poem Skat, Nice win. I enjoyed reading it....Hugs...Roger

  1. Date: 12/3/2013 5:59:00 PM

    ooh la la. GREAT twist at the end. congrats .

  1. Date: 12/3/2013 1:35:00 PM

    Nice one Skat many congratulations xx

  1. Date: 10/26/2013 11:03:00 AM

    Very deep observation it's. Nicely expressed the feeling of boring. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 10/9/2013 9:50:00 PM

    I know exactly how you felt when you wrote this. When I am bored, I write about what I don't have, or what I wish I could be doing. I really liked this poem, and I did not get bored while reading it! Terrific work, SKAT!...Thanks for all of the nice comments.They are very much appreciated, my friend! :)

  1. Date: 9/4/2013 8:59:00 AM

    Hi Skat! Thanks for commenting on my poem it's nice to meet you! I really like this poem! The way you use those short single word lines is very powerful. And how lucky you are to be so deeply in love! That makes two of us :) Anyways nice to meet you poet friend!

  1. Date: 7/12/2013 3:15:00 PM

    It's tough when the one we love seems distant. Hope it all worked out in the end.

  1. Date: 6/23/2013 1:01:00 PM

    I can feel from your words what absence lead to....... Beautiful

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 12:41:00 PM

    This is sooo good! I've been reading a few of your poems and I LOVE your work! Keep it up! ^_^ ~Chante <3

  1. Date: 10/6/2010 8:47:00 AM

    I totally get this... and am living it at the moment. My love and I are an ocean apart. Waking up without each other is the norm... thank goodness for internet video-conferencing.... without which we would rarely have opportunity to interact. One more year..... *sigh*

  1. Date: 9/25/2010 11:49:00 PM

    ¿Heya Skat, donde el carajo ha sido usted?~Christo

  1. Date: 9/23/2010 4:34:00 AM

    Hi SKAT, Thanks for the kind remarks you made about my THE GOOD WIFE.....many people fail to see the word tricks contained in it. You may be interested in another, filled with similar tricks, which is called ADVICE FOR LATE TEENS – GOOD TEACHER vs BAD PARENTS. sincere best wishes Syd

  1. Date: 9/22/2010 5:55:00 AM

    Another emotive hard hitting poem! I loved the beat in this and the rhyme, nicely done! hugs, kris

  1. Date: 9/21/2010 2:45:00 AM

    very interesting this, better to be bored than hurt again, SKAT.. Harry

  1. Date: 9/20/2010 4:15:00 PM

    Interesting write, SKAT! But I'd be careful about liars. Better to stay away from them. Better be bored than be broken. Thanks for sharing. Well done! Caroline.

  1. Date: 9/19/2010 6:36:00 PM

    sounds like a deep boredom. sometimes being bored can teach use a thing or two. bored of who you are with can be. . .dangerous. . . ~Always&Forever Lynette

  1. Date: 9/19/2010 6:00:00 PM

    enjoyed reading today!

  1. Date: 9/19/2010 1:19:00 PM

    Nice to hear from you!!! I see from the number of comments you got on this Amazing Poem; you are still as popular as ever. You are getting up there with the SOUPER STARS in the quality of your work.Your sis stopped by the other day and I thought of you. You made my day, A good feeling one today. You are one of a very small handful here that I can trust to believe are really my friend. So shame on me for not keeping in touch. But I will, I promise.

  1. Date: 9/19/2010 12:27:00 PM

    I felt like this once but lost it with his continuous lies and cheats will learn to ride a bigger horse and not a pony lol for that fall will be real and not bump and bruises also thanks hun for your kind comments appreicate it keep up the wonderful writing

  1. Date: 9/19/2010 11:35:00 AM

    HI Irma :) So nice to hear from you-- was about to leave here in a bit :) thanks, you have a wonderful day filled with love and smiles as well ^_^ --- nikko :)

  1. Date: 9/18/2010 12:46:00 AM

    Hey Irma, sorry been away for so long. Moved from KY to FL in a matter of 5 months ago. Just started writing again. posted 3 tonight. Loved your current poem here. It expresses deep feelings. I like the fact that you can actually picture what you read in your mind to help understand the writer. Keep up the good work. Glad to be back. miss ya lady :) ~ Saphire~

  1. Date: 9/17/2010 9:04:00 PM

    Hey BBF...so happy your contest is going so well.. almost finished ...31 entries tonight luv.. thankxx..I so appreciate your kind gesture..luv... good luck.. I luv all the entries.. maybe they could all be number one???????? your BBF..luv..

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