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BORED

BORED

I need what you give me,
the hell with the world!
Greed for you is all I see
That one time, 
that one line
won't let me be!
You kicked my heart on start
When it sat there lazy and bored.

Flames for you deeply burn
A desire to one day return
I open my window
May be you will follow
Words like the European-Indo
Only you seem to understand
These feelings so overwhelming
Beyond mountains so boring.

I hold back
Your million kisses
Making wishes
I can't breath in my dream
Since the day you stole my breath
Love's got me with a hold so extreme
A love connection ending in death
Yawning to reality
My heart cut out by the sword
A wild fatality ending in tears
Sleeping early when I'm bored.

Without you
Life has no meaning 
the rage
The power
The hunger
Thriving on you
Hypnotize
By your lies
One thing I can't deny
Waking up without you
Is like the innocence of,
Yawning to the real meaning of BORING.

                SKAT

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  1. Date: 4/19/2013 12:41:00 PM

    This is sooo good! I've been reading a few of your poems and I LOVE your work! Keep it up! ^_^ ~Chante <3

  1. Date: 10/6/2010 8:47:00 AM

    I totally get this... and am living it at the moment. My love and I are an ocean apart. Waking up without each other is the norm... thank goodness for internet video-conferencing.... without which we would rarely have opportunity to interact. One more year..... *sigh*

  1. Date: 9/23/2010 4:34:00 AM

    Hi SKAT, Thanks for the kind remarks you made about my THE GOOD WIFE.....many people fail to see the word tricks contained in it. You may be interested in another, filled with similar tricks, which is called ADVICE FOR LATE TEENS – GOOD TEACHER vs BAD PARENTS. sincere best wishes Syd

  1. Date: 9/22/2010 5:55:00 AM

    Another emotive hard hitting poem! I loved the beat in this and the rhyme, nicely done! hugs, kris

  1. Date: 9/21/2010 2:45:00 AM

    very interesting this, better to be bored than hurt again, SKAT.. Harry

  1. Date: 9/20/2010 4:15:00 PM

    Interesting write, SKAT! But I'd be careful about liars. Better to stay away from them. Better be bored than be broken. Thanks for sharing. Well done! Caroline.

  1. Date: 9/19/2010 6:36:00 PM

    sounds like a deep boredom. sometimes being bored can teach use a thing or two. bored of who you are with can be. . .dangerous. . . ~Always&Forever Lynette

  1. Date: 9/19/2010 6:00:00 PM

    enjoyed reading today!

  1. Date: 9/19/2010 1:19:00 PM

    Nice to hear from you!!! I see from the number of comments you got on this Amazing Poem; you are still as popular as ever. You are getting up there with the SOUPER STARS in the quality of your work.Your sis stopped by the other day and I thought of you. You made my day, A good feeling one today. You are one of a very small handful here that I can trust to believe are really my friend. So shame on me for not keeping in touch. But I will, I promise.

  1. Date: 9/19/2010 12:27:00 PM

    I felt like this once but lost it with his continuous lies and cheats will learn to ride a bigger horse and not a pony lol for that fall will be real and not bump and bruises also thanks hun for your kind comments appreicate it keep up the wonderful writing

  1. Date: 9/19/2010 11:35:00 AM

    HI Irma :) So nice to hear from you-- was about to leave here in a bit :) thanks, you have a wonderful day filled with love and smiles as well ^_^ --- nikko :)

  1. Date: 9/18/2010 12:46:00 AM

    Hey Irma, sorry been away for so long. Moved from KY to FL in a matter of 5 months ago. Just started writing again. posted 3 tonight. Loved your current poem here. It expresses deep feelings. I like the fact that you can actually picture what you read in your mind to help understand the writer. Keep up the good work. Glad to be back. miss ya lady :) ~ Saphire~

  1. Date: 9/17/2010 9:04:00 PM

    Hey BBF...so happy your contest is going so well.. almost finished ...31 entries tonight luv.. thankxx..I so appreciate your kind gesture..luv... good luck.. I luv all the entries.. maybe they could all be number one???????? your BBF..luv..

  1. Date: 9/17/2010 7:04:00 PM

    gorgeous and graphic

  1. Date: 9/14/2010 7:26:00 PM

    love it! great poem!

  1. Date: 9/14/2010 6:56:00 AM

    You don't seem bored here my poetic friend ! Great blister of thoughts ! james

  1. Date: 9/12/2010 2:26:00 PM

    All in one night's dream SKAT? Awesome! Smile, Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 9/12/2010 1:22:00 AM

    Your deep love and feelings splashes every where that is a very rare quality and a creative gift for a beautiful writer like you. But be aware if it is being misused my friend. It’s a beautiful write. And thanks for your kind comments on Patradoot. Love and best wishes ...Ravindra... s k a t

  1. Date: 9/11/2010 1:10:00 PM

    thankxxx Irma for your sweet hello today... we are sitting outside in the sunshine enjoying the 80 degree temps..luv.. rain all day tomorrow from the new hurricane coming at us .... thankxxx for the spectacular contest.. I have read about ten entries and they are all good.... I especially enjoyed P.D.'s luv... she is awesome ..another BBF and another great poetess..like u luv.. enjoy your weekend... 'hi' to Royal..luv..

  1. Date: 9/11/2010 5:39:00 AM

    well done, we all get bored at times...written form the heart... Michael

  1. Date: 9/11/2010 3:37:00 AM

    Interesting thoughts penned..Well, I hope that you don't have to wake up without this person who keeps you from boredom....Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...Have a great day! Sara

  1. Date: 9/10/2010 11:15:00 PM

    Still waiting for a new post from you!!! Thanks for your sweet comment. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 9/10/2010 8:49:00 PM

    That's Fever, and the write is like an obsession. You've got a grave mental disease (Plato on Love) and it bleeds through your words. U R A Fever - The Kills.

  1. Date: 9/10/2010 7:32:00 PM

    wow this sure is a different take on boredom, Irma ;) & perfect reading for me haha since I was writing something that had to do with the word-- hope your weekend is doing great :) will try to come up with an entry for your contest soon, ok?? :) I'm a forever crammer ;) -- nikko :)

  1. Date: 9/7/2010 1:49:00 PM

    So well written, SKAT! Enjoyed the read this evening. I haven't been on Soup lately but posted two new poems tonight. Wish you a great week!...Love, Gert

  1. Date: 9/7/2010 9:18:00 AM

    I enjoyed that.

  1. Date: 9/7/2010 8:48:00 AM

    Good stuff! There is nothing harder to write than a love poem! Thank you for your kind observations on "Relucktant Warrior." I wish your son well. After 24 years I'm a bit of a cynic about military service; but it does not at all hinder my appreciation for those who take up the defense of this land.

  1. Date: 9/7/2010 7:57:00 AM

    great write. i was happy when i saw your name. next time don't keep the NOTORIOUS F.L.I.R.T waiting so long.lol.

  1. Date: 9/7/2010 4:34:00 AM

    Great! A yawn with tragic eyes. Love, Dave

  1. Date: 9/7/2010 12:02:00 AM

    WEll, that sounds really cool to have THAT feeling, Irma. I'll take that any day!!! I enjoyed reading this. Thanks so much for all your comments to me even though I don't have time to be here lately. LUv, Andrea

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