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New beginning

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New beginning

One room apartment
and days alone to ponder
just what apart meant

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  1. Date: 9/10/2010 5:24:00 AM
    Brilliant, just love the way you play with language. Also, I'm thinking because of a Haikus' length limitations the feeling of sadness is elevated. I normally don't care for Haikus but this may be one of the best I've read.

  1. Date: 9/9/2010 5:41:00 PM
    I really enjoyed this one. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 9/7/2010 1:59:00 PM
    That sounds like being trapped and lonely or free as a bird to do what one wants to do when they want to do it....I like the last half of that previous line to do what one wants to do..Sara

  1. Date: 9/6/2010 11:06:00 AM
    Something to tear the heart and rent the emotions ... a poem from a wonderful mind

  1. Date: 9/5/2010 6:35:00 AM
    Thanks for commenting on my poetry. I can sure relate to your words in this poem, I spend hours in comptemplation, and then I write of it in poetry.. love Constance

  1. Date: 9/4/2010 9:27:00 PM
    Beautiful words telling the gravity of loneliness but for a poet, loneliness can also be a boon, if you can make it. Try. Many thanks for your sweet comments on my Poem Patradoot35. Love and best wishes....Ravindra........Wayne Sapp.

  1. Date: 9/4/2010 8:34:00 PM
    Nice haiku with good and apt images, Wayne

  1. Date: 9/4/2010 7:32:00 PM
    uhoh...did some one make a blunder??

  1. Date: 9/4/2010 1:25:00 PM
    It sure makes you think. Enjoyed reading. Love Scarlett