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Ending the Thoughts

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Ending the Thoughts

A tear soaked blanket confines my movement
Limited in every possible way
I cannot break free from this deadly fear
I feel it each and every day
Drowning in my own sorrows
Leaving behind of legacy of failure
Being remembered for the disappointments
Exploding from the pressure
Leading up to the day of my demise
Rambling thoughts of suicide
The voices telling me to end my suffering
Thoughts of living did collide
Leading myself away from the edge
Bringing me back to realization
Life is more important with love
Regaining the sensation

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  1. Date: 9/3/2010 5:19:00 PM
    nice one, enjoyed the read..P.D.