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Surrender and Gratitude

today's day was molded pure
to a sweet surrender I'm sure

to stop the fight of life's flight
now to God I hold on tight

to choose the right of eternity
to lose what's lost, and be me

I sing with joy of abundance
gratitude for the chance of the dance

no longer in a trance to escape
my life no longer reels of red tape

as if guided imagery  on my life's tape
I travel to a golden lamb, my life I shape

Gratitude in my hands I'm sure
with God's sweet love my heart is pure

now on the red carpet to heavens blue cherabims
going up a spiral ivy ridden staircase, I'm with Him!


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  1. Date: 9/2/2010 12:10:00 PM

    Beautiful, enjoyed,..p.d.

  1. Date: 9/2/2010 11:25:00 AM

    Susan such a lovely and inspirational piece to read .. so blessed to be your friend and fellow poet with such a wonderful gift to give God glory.. enjoyed with luv..my friend and thankxxx for your sweet comments today..luv..

  1. Date: 9/2/2010 10:37:00 AM

    Beautiful write on surrendering everything to Him, love this write Susan, hope you are enjoying your day.. Love Wilma

  1. Date: 9/2/2010 10:07:00 AM

    Excellent work that is a testimony to your faith..I especially like next to the last couplets..Keep the spirit inspired work flowing from your creative pen..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

  1. Date: 9/2/2010 9:19:00 AM

    lovely