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Below is the poem entitled The Dance which was written by poet Melanie Samuel. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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The Dance

They drown in each other,
Inhaling immensely as they take the plunge,
Plummeting down as the bubbles rise,
Getting lost in the elegance.
Ascending to the sky,
Twirling in a dance of satisfaction,
Breathing heavy as they break the surface,
Drawing in life,
Before cascading under the rays of the sun.
Like a graceful waltz
They breach only for a moment,
To replenish their lives,
As they become one.

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  1. Date: 9/2/2010 4:01:00 AM
    I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Melanie. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/1/2010 8:09:00 PM
    lovely

  1. Date: 9/1/2010 7:17:00 PM
    Welcome to Poetry Soup.. a perfect write at a time when there is a contest called Dance ... posted on the contest page... why not enter and try to win and have your poetry read more often..good luck..with luv..