Submit a Poem
Get Your Premium Membership
spacer


Comments Inbox

 

Acerora Latte

I day dream in the coffee shop 
My cafe latte is ready and hot
My mind is thinking about nothing but you
wondering if you are thinking about me or not

I day dream about your cherry lips
My cheeks get stupidly pink
My mind is in the thoughts asleep
Not fearing to melt or sink

I wonder if I will get to know you well
I wonder if you knew that I'm gazing at you
You make me feel like a stalker sometimes
You make me feel stupid and dumb too

But then, I imagine your smiley face 
The latte gets cold coz i forgot to drink
I don't care anymore I tell myself
I'm so in to you, just waiting for a wink

Enough day dreaming I seriously stop
I take my cup and start to drink 
It tasted like acerora i don't know why
I started to day dream about you again and rethink


Please Login to post a comment
 
  1. Date: 9/3/2010 12:25:00 PM

    Sometimes a man must cross the line of words ... and grab his dream, if you did would your poem read the same way still? Very good.

  1. Date: 9/1/2010 11:10:00 PM

    Can picture the scene so well. Well done!

  1. Date: 9/1/2010 9:53:00 AM

    Thank you for sharing your poetry Kaila. Poets here offer such diverse writings and to me it is a pleasure to read each and everyone. I will not be here at the Soup to read from Friday through Monday. I hope you will find mountains of inspiration during that time. I look forward to reading when I return. Have a great weekend. Love, Carol