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Nearing You

I feel so lost in this dream
You're were everything to me
My world my life my love
Come closer I'll come undone 
I hear your voice but it's fading 
Words are lost for all this blaming
I love you, I do for now let go
Hard for you, hard for me no
Lie lie lie lie 
Please say goodbye

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  1. Date: 9/1/2010 5:37:00 AM

    Thank you for sharing your poetry Autumn. Poets here offer such diverse writings and to me it is a pleasure to read each and everyone. I will not be here at the Soup to read from Friday through Monday. I hope you will find mountains of inspiration during that time. I look forward to reading when I return. Have a great weekend. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/31/2010 6:47:00 PM

    A sad tale - well put together poem though. Peace & Love Matthew Anish.