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A moon and its pleasure

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A moon and its pleasure

  A moon's pleasure appears like a new born baby
  Its shape under the sky is concave and small
  Oh very big and satellite a planet
  A light never seem to be faded
  Million of stars rival not the pleasure of moon
  Radiates more light at its fullness
  Light without fuel nor faggot
  The life of moon is the happiness of the sky
  All other creatures on the planet earth
  What a wonderful pleasure!
  Seeing all over its illuminated part of the world. 


  

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  1. Date: 11/23/2010 8:39:00 AM
    nicely penned poetry,and thanks for your comments left but my name is NOT Robert , it's Francine (roberts is my last name)

  1. Date: 11/23/2010 6:10:00 AM
    Thanks for stopping by my poems again... this is my favorite poem of yours...no matter where we are we can all see the moon....

  1. Date: 9/4/2010 10:42:00 AM
    hey bro I am from Ogun state but based in LAGOS BUT i WILL BE GOING FOR service soon so.... Catch ya!

  1. Date: 9/1/2010 11:29:00 AM
    Nice and dreamy

  1. Date: 8/31/2010 12:17:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your poetry today Olalere. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/31/2010 10:08:00 AM
    enjoyed your poem today...welcome to poetry soup and if you dare...if you can take a real challenge check out some of my poems some times. ;)