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When I Pray And Fast

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When I Pray And Fast

The road I follow is sometimes hard to find.
It seems well lit, but I feel so blind.

The devil tries to seduce me with things full of sin.
It is ever so hard not to allow temptation to win.

Even my family and friends seem distant and cold.
Leaving me feeling that for 30 pieces of silver, I was sold.

Despite the hardships that have happened now and in the past.
I know that I can endure it all, when I pray and fast.

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  1. Date: 9/2/2010 7:42:00 AM
    good write continue the fight and keep the faith

  1. Date: 9/1/2010 2:59:00 PM
    Interesting thoughts that you have penned in these couplets..Thanks for the comments on my work...I especially like the second set of couplets ...That devil is one tough guy to fight against..Sara

  1. Date: 9/1/2010 1:05:00 PM
    enjoyed so real!! great job!

  1. Date: 8/30/2010 12:11:00 PM
    Wow I am reading a lot of excellent poetry today. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Hoping you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration Sheol. Love, Carol