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haiku (a secret shared)

skipping on tip toes sharing secrets with the wind a hush of crisp leaves
** for 'A leaf in the wind (Autumn)' sponsored by Rick Parise

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  1. Date: 9/24/2010 1:54:00 PM

    Really like your second line! It make this piece really magical I think. Congratulations on getting a win in this contest.

  1. Date: 9/15/2010 4:17:00 PM

    Nice autumn haiku! Liked tha last line especially! Yours Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 9/12/2010 2:56:00 PM

    Many congratulations Sharon on your win in Rick's fine contest with this gem of a Haiku >> James :)

  1. Date: 9/10/2010 8:33:00 PM

    Sharon you can lock your contest/change date~click on contest title on admin. page~Rick

  1. Date: 9/10/2010 1:15:00 PM

    nice haiku, brought a grin to my chin...

  1. Date: 9/8/2010 4:24:00 PM

    Hi Sharon, I had a type-o on a poem for your contest, all has been fixed~Rick

  1. Date: 9/8/2010 12:03:00 AM

    The more I read it, the more I like it. "a hush of crisp leaves"...very well written.

  1. Date: 9/7/2010 3:56:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win Sharon in Rick Parise's contest "A Leaf In The Wind (Autumn)". Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/6/2010 9:25:00 PM

    A NICE ONE DEAR SHARON ! Thanks for reading and commenting on my poems . - Raj

  1. Date: 9/6/2010 4:40:00 PM

    beautiful, congrats on your win

  1. Date: 9/6/2010 11:13:00 AM

    Wow, Sharon, did I see this before. I just love this. Congratulations. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 9/6/2010 4:25:00 AM

    Sharon, congrats on your win in the contest :) Wilma

  1. Date: 9/6/2010 4:24:00 AM

    Sgaron, congrats on your win in the contest :) Wilma

  1. Date: 9/5/2010 10:14:00 PM

    Congratulations on your winning haiku Sharon. Great imagery!

  1. Date: 9/5/2010 7:53:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win in the contest, Sharon. Peace, love, Audrey

  1. Date: 9/5/2010 7:02:00 PM

    Congratulations on the 14th place win in the contest, Sharon

  1. Date: 9/5/2010 6:07:00 PM

    An original approach of childhood skipping on tip toes. I used a child's vision in my haiku too:). Congratulations on your win, dear Sharon. Love, iolanda

  1. Date: 9/5/2010 5:48:00 PM

    Congrats, Sharon. Nice going. Ralph

  1. Date: 9/5/2010 5:11:00 PM

    Congrats Sharon on your winning poem in Rick's contest... a lovely write and win for u to enjoy tonight my friend with luv..

  1. Date: 9/1/2010 5:57:00 PM

    Oh, I lovel this! skipping on tip toes- just love the sound and image it conjures. this is lovely! best wishes and hugs, kris

  1. Date: 8/31/2010 1:45:00 PM

    Hi Sharon :) -- quick hi ;) -- heehee-- enjoyed this lovely haiku of yours that evokes such a carefree feeling for me...;) see you around....hugs nikko :)

  1. Date: 8/31/2010 1:12:00 PM

    Of to the park I go this Autumn to live this lovely Haiku >> James :)

  1. Date: 8/30/2010 5:49:00 PM

    A nice haiku on the falling leaf contest. Good luck, Sharon

  1. Date: 8/30/2010 4:53:00 PM

    I'm loving these Autumn poems....somebody help...I dislike the heat so much...ty for the coming inspiring lust of mine...the cold !! james

  1. Date: 8/30/2010 4:07:00 PM

    LUV this one Sharon.. good luck in the new contest.. my entry is "Resplendent Rhapsody".. my wedding photos are now posted on my new blog..luv.. was only allowed ten as the systems will not let more than ten now.. and we have hundreds from Italy.. enjoy..luv..

  1. Date: 8/30/2010 11:58:00 AM

    Lovely image from childhood. I like this very much!