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I want to be....

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I want to be....

I want to be a star
So high and so far
Always shining in the dark
knowing with her light where you are

I want to be a star
Always around the smiling moon
Doesn't matter if Full, or half 
I'm shining there even when it's gone

I want to be a star
You look at me with wondering how
Your sad eyes turned to true pleasure
You forgot about your pain somehow

I want to be a star
Always dazzling in the night sky
Dancing there with the hiding stars
That can't be seen with your eye

I want to be a star
Always shining luminously
Always looking at you from far
And getting her love from you impressively

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  1. Date: 8/28/2010 8:27:00 PM

    Your writing is very pleasant to read, Kaila! Have you always been in Japan? LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 8/28/2010 8:19:00 PM

    U are a star .. u wrote this lovely poem .. and shared it with us all.. enjoyed on this happy weekend..with luv..

  1. Date: 8/28/2010 7:32:00 PM

    Kaila, i am sure in your own way you are all of the above, enjoyed your poem,..p.d.