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  1. Date: 9/28/2010 4:30:00 PM

    Hi, sweet Lynette. I enjoyed your comments you left me. You should be the sweetheart of Soup!!! (don't tell Linda I said that. heeheehee) Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 9/20/2010 6:35:00 AM

    sounds charming like a historical romance full of dreams and promises!

  1. Date: 9/16/2010 7:40:00 PM

    An elite piece my friend.. very visual with superb dialogue inviting to the poem's theme... the essence of poetic genius luv.. perfection .. enjoyed tonight with luv..

  1. Date: 9/9/2010 8:24:00 AM

    We've been missing you, Lynette. Hope all is well. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 9/8/2010 10:39:00 PM

    hi! Lynette, how are you. wondering where your poet mind is at. Having fun at school I suppose,..p.d.

  1. Date: 9/7/2010 7:29:00 PM

    Hey, about, "Nigerian Queen" I was thinking about one of my fav. singers, "Sade"LOL I'm single my young friend. Thnx. for the comments. Jimmy

  1. Date: 9/2/2010 10:42:00 PM

    Smile ~ "'There's No Place Like Home;' That Is, 'Your Rainbows Beautiful Verse!!!'" ~ I must run to drop a couple of overdue coms but, I shall see "Your Beauty" tomorrow; with "Joy" ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'Your Majestic' Always &, to All You Love, Forever," John! ~ Smile, "Have The Most Beautiful of Tomorrows 'Dear Lovely Lynette,' Amid The Neon City Lights of, 'Beautiful Love;'" Bye Beautiful Lady!:) ~

  1. Date: 9/2/2010 10:36:00 PM

    Smile ~ "You Are Sooo Creative; Sooo Soft; Sooo Lovely; Sooo Beautiful; Sooo Soo sooo; 'That's You, Beautiful Lynette;' That's 'You, Inside My Breath; Breathing; Beating; 'Soooulll'" ~ Smile, can "You" tell "Your One of 'My Very Favourite Poetess' In The Whole Wide World, Too!!!" ~ "Love The Dreams In This, 'Masterpiece;' Just Like I Do 'You;' Another Fave, Amid 'Your Immaculate Collection Dear' &, 'Ruby Red, Slippers' Said" ~ ....Cont:)

  1. Date: 9/2/2010 10:21:00 PM

    Smile ~ "Ahhh," finally, I made it back to, a girl that I think about "All the Time" ~ I can't believe that I have been soo busy and even a bit blind I would have to somehow think; I pray that "Your Beauty" shall forgive myself for such distance dear but, "!!!NEVER AGAIN!!!" ~ "Hello Precious, Lovely, Gifted & 'Beyond Beautiful, Lynette Chachere!!!'" ~ I surely hope that "Your Splendors" life has been treating "Your Treasures" magnificently dear ~ ....Cont:)

  1. Date: 9/2/2010 4:46:00 PM

    Hey girlfriend..did u see my awesome wedding photos posted on my blog yet? view and enjoy sweetie and have a safe and happy holiday weekend..luv..

  1. Date: 9/1/2010 2:21:00 AM

    Yet another intriguing story you've woven here Lynette :) I like how you put here making promises to the golden moon--keep writing Lynette :) enjoy your week & I am looking forward to reading more of your writes! -- nikko :)

  1. Date: 8/30/2010 5:30:00 AM

    Lynette, I could relate so well to your poem and your next to last stanza really spoke to me with your beautiful words.

  1. Date: 8/27/2010 11:36:00 AM

    Nice one Lynette. I love a happy ending to a Nasrrative. Thanks for your comments, they are important to me. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 8/27/2010 10:38:00 AM

    Lynette, Lynette, how are you? Love is the best thing and a beautiful thing to wait and find. Promises at times heals the pain. Whishing is what keeps love and hope alive, loved your poem,..p.d.

  1. Date: 8/27/2010 10:02:00 AM

    HI, LYNN. NICE TO SEE YOUR WAY OF SHOWING EMOTIONS THAT LAST AND CAN BE COMFORT THROUGH LIGHT AND FRIENDS ENJOYED*luv~SKAT

  1. Date: 8/26/2010 9:58:00 PM

    Truly beautiful, dear Lynette. You're are so very gifted, and very generous. Thanks for your comments today. Always, love, Audrey

  1. Date: 8/26/2010 9:23:00 PM

    AWESOME Lynette.. u need to do a book my friend.. this piece is fabulous.. is it true? or imagination? does it continue? or imagination? wow.. am flying to Mississippi to see my son right now..luv..

  1. Date: 8/26/2010 9:14:00 PM

    Hey, I sure hope this one has an ending for me to read. I LOVE this one, Lynette! thanks for reading my poems today. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 8/26/2010 7:46:00 PM

    It seems she endured so much torment from her Godfather, but with her friend's encouragement, she was able to maintain hope and joy. The gift of such a friendship is a precious one indeed, Lynette, and I pray a city of bright lights awaits us all. Very uplifting poem, dear friend. I read it several times to admire not only the beauty of the writing style, but the power of the inspirational message as well. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 8/26/2010 7:09:00 PM

    Nice thoughts full of hopes well worded, Lynette

  1. Date: 8/26/2010 5:38:00 PM

    sounds full of promise...I remember those days! go for it all gal.