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being abnormal

people grow up and live their life
feed their child and the wife
earn the money and enjoy lot
then what happens is they finally die

will you be the same 
to earn name and fame
Or have thought of the other game
to give your life for others who are in pain


do whatever you can and never miss
to gain that happiness and ultimate peace
to help poor and needy  think from heart
so that others happiness will be your lifes part

we are healthy and we are normal 
but should live our life being abnormal
In a sense that u will not  live like others 
but to hold hands of all and make  them brothers. 

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  1. Date: 8/31/2010 2:28:00 PM

    Shishir, A very warm welcome to you. I look forward to reading more of your inspiring poetry. Your last stanza in this moving work expresses so well my feelings to embrace all of mankind. An excellent message toward a path of enlightenment. Aloha, Connie

  1. Date: 8/26/2010 6:25:00 AM

    enjoyed reading today.

  1. Date: 8/26/2010 4:20:00 AM

    Well expressed positive thoughts, Shishir

  1. Date: 8/26/2010 4:03:00 AM

    I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Shishir. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/26/2010 3:43:00 AM

    Nicely interpreted the essence of the life, the basic answer, the reason and the way of life!! Beautiful poem!!

  1. Date: 8/26/2010 3:12:00 AM

    To give of ones self is the ultimate gift. Nice poem and an excellent read.

  1. Date: 8/26/2010 3:10:00 AM

    Beautiful poem. I'll be looking for more of ur poems thanks for a strong and powerful poem godbless. Te'Arra:)