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Sterile Rain

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Sterile Rain

 pit      pat

    pitter        patter

 pitter   patter   pitter   patter

a playful LIGHTNESS WEIGHS HEAVY
defiant droplets dance

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down the outside of the window … pain 
a heart FILLED WITH EMPTINESS
FRAZZLED AND RAW 
bright sunshine is too brash

yet raindrops ... 

so reminiscent of a sound
~l~o~n~g~i~n~g~
to be heard on the
(inside)

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  1. Date: 9/12/2010 1:37:00 PM
    Dear Sharon, Congratulations on YOUR Well deserved 1st Place Win "downthe outside of the window ..."Pain" " I am with you in feekings for the rest of the POEM reminiscent to me that word has such deep emotional meaning Superb POEM YOUR Liege ALWAYS... HG

  1. Date: 9/10/2010 10:17:00 PM
    Hey, congratulations on your win, Sharon. And where have you been lately? I miss you. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 9/7/2010 12:52:00 PM
    Super congrats btw-- very well deserved definitely!! ^_^

  1. Date: 9/7/2010 12:51:00 PM
    How I could I have missed this awesome free verse of yours, Sharon?? I absolutely love this --it's so unique and I just love how you formatted it-- you know how I love the rain and this is going to my faves, haha-- loved the oxymoron you put in here-- very clever--this write just captivated me! & haha yup I am now a tick enjoying the sterile rain, lol ^_^ hugs to you thanks again for dropping by all of my blogs you are a sweetie to do so :) nikko :) eep gotta sleep see you around :)

  1. Date: 9/2/2010 6:44:00 AM
    lovely, touching write! congrad's

  1. Date: 9/1/2010 6:00:00 PM
    Wonderfully done! Great layout to create visual poetry as well! Congratulations on this beauty! hugs, Kris

  1. Date: 8/30/2010 4:56:00 AM
    Congratulations Sharon on your win in Charles Henderson's contest "Free For All Do As You Please". Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/29/2010 2:21:00 AM
    Congrats on your win, Sharon. A very interesting poem and an ever more interesting way to present it. You are a talented poet. Emily

  1. Date: 8/28/2010 1:10:00 PM
    Very creative and expressive is this write...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

  1. Date: 8/27/2010 7:25:00 PM
    Congrats on the win, Sharon

  1. Date: 8/27/2010 5:07:00 PM
    Sharon, congratulations on your 1st place win! Interesitng poem, with a unique and fantastic layout~Chris

  1. Date: 8/27/2010 2:09:00 PM
    Congratulations on taking first place with your great poem, Sharon! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 8/27/2010 1:36:00 PM
    Wowie, Sharon, what an awesome win on your awesome poem! ! LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 8/27/2010 1:19:00 PM
    Congrats Sharon on your big first place win for an excellent write and artistic piece .. enjoy my friend.. with luv..

  1. Date: 8/27/2010 12:26:00 PM
    A truly unique piece. Congrats on your big win. BG

  1. Date: 8/27/2010 11:41:00 AM
    Wow....again, my congrats for a job well done..and beautiful to look at! Great job, Sharon! ~ Love, Carrie

  1. Date: 8/27/2010 10:56:00 AM
    Congratulations, Sharon on your worthy first place, Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 8/25/2010 9:47:00 PM
    seems like it could have been for that one contest with oxymorons or something. this is very interesting,Sharon. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 8/25/2010 8:14:00 AM
    Awesome poem Sharon, love the way the words bring the rain drops right in ! james

  1. Date: 8/24/2010 9:41:00 PM
    Very interesting way depict the pen picture of raindrops with rhythm, Sharon

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