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Unkind Twist

In the twinkling of an eye
A smile it took my soul
The world just drifted by
As Cupid took control

Besotted by her spell
And held in constant bliss
Oh what story could I tell
That first and tender kiss

The Gods of love so kind
Lips with mine did bless
And paradise I did find 
In her holding tenderness

And so with love I danced
That warm and wistful day
My heart and soul romanced
Your scent my sense play

But love can be so unkind
So fickle with its charms
Can prick a tortured mind
As you lie another's arms


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  1. Date: 8/31/2010 3:23:00 PM

    Although I believe love is pure and its the people who are fickle ...I still love it...still a wonderful write...Allie

  1. Date: 8/24/2010 7:51:00 AM

    Hearts can be very fickle, Daniel. You are such a romantic man that I can't imagine someone leaving you to "lie in another's arms." Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 8/23/2010 4:24:00 AM

    oh no....fickle love-- your poem is well written my friend!