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  1. Date: 12/31/2010 5:37:00 PM
    Lynette, this is a very emotional poem - well written piece - Happy New Year, mj

  1. Date: 12/21/2010 6:09:00 AM
    your absolutly right when you said i was confused, john

  1. Date: 10/4/2010 10:59:00 AM
    Hello, Lynette~ HOW r U* chilling and saying Hi*luv~skat

  1. Date: 9/19/2010 1:18:00 PM
    very unique and very WOW! 7

  1. Date: 9/16/2010 7:42:00 PM
    Emotional .. a heavy duty write about a theme so sensitive.. well written luv.. intense Verse luv..

  1. Date: 9/1/2010 1:50:00 AM
    wow this sure is heavy stuff-- very emotional write Lynette :) & yup I am trying to write-- haha but it is elusive... maybe soon, hopefully soon...thanks for dropping by---nikko ;)

  1. Date: 8/26/2010 9:15:00 PM
    and about my cat, no, believe me, you don't want a cat like EITHER of my two. Not one of them can replace the affectionate CAllie cat of mine that died several years ago! I have such bad luck finding sweet cats! Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 8/26/2010 9:12:00 PM
    Of course my beauti-licious boy is also Booty-licious. hahaha. (in my mind of course)

  1. Date: 8/24/2010 11:17:00 PM
    Hi, Lynette, thanks for stopping by to see my poem. You are the greatest.(ps whatever happned to "you know who" that used to be on this site?) LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 8/24/2010 3:33:00 PM
    The emotion comes through your words. Unique style in this poem. Keep on writing! Thank you for your kind comment. Karen

  1. Date: 8/23/2010 10:58:00 PM
    Hey there Lynette, wow, this write was pretty deep!, I love how you really get your point across, love this write of yours Lynette..P.D.

  1. Date: 8/23/2010 8:05:00 AM
    Hi Lynette! Thanks for the kind comments, always. Great write, "Accused and Abused"..I know it hurts to be accused, abused and blamed for something you're not responsible for..we pray for Fathers who shuck their responsibilities leaving Mothers to play the role! It's just too much! Great insight! Love, Audrey

  1. Date: 8/23/2010 3:09:00 AM
    A very catchy title, Lynette. I love your flow, obviously a lot of hidden meaning in this verse. Nice write! Thanks for your comments, they are important to me. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 8/22/2010 12:52:00 AM
    This is very interesting and intense, Lynette. I a kind of confused by the woman saying she is not a father. Is this some kind of metaphysical thing? well, just stopping by here on my way off the Soup to say, goodnight sweet young Lynette. See ya later, Andrea

  1. Date: 8/21/2010 6:53:00 PM

  1. Date: 8/21/2010 2:39:00 PM
    Very intense Lynette.. but very enjoyable read as it makes the reader think ... and analyze the phrases.. wonderful piece my friend.. enjoyed on my wedding day ...luv..ciao..

  1. Date: 8/21/2010 12:55:00 PM
    False accusations can be very painful to the victims, Lynette. You have a spiritual quality to your poetry that John Freeman and I admire very much! Certainly no one could accuse you of slaughter; it is just not in your nature to hurt others. God bless you for your wisdom and insight. Love, Carolyn