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Black Rain

~BLACK RAIN~

Another rainy stormy night,
nothing will ever feel the same.
Thunder makes me fear with fright,
Theirs no way to call your name.
To be alone is no delight,
here I am alone with shame.
It runs trough me like day and night,
lonesome here for playing my game.
I wish you where here to hold me real tight.
Forgive me for I am  the only one to blame.

A darken rainy stormy night!
Here I whither away in the BLACK RAIN!
In that selfish moment I did not realize,
all I was doing was causing myself pain.
You took and shook me with a big surprise!
And, showed me that my cheating had nothing to gain.
With you in distance I lose my self,
sitting all alone in the BLACK RAIN.

BLACK RAIN, BLACK RAIN!
Please stop the pain, its my love I want to gain.

Tears from me you wouldn't take.
It was my fault to take the fall.
It does not mean my love to you was fake.
Without you I feel real small.
The hurt runs deep~Deeper than a lake!
The hurt runs high~Higher than the tallest wall!
The hurt is heavy~something you can't shake!
The hurt is like a mystery~you can't solve at all! 
BLACK RAIN!

How these cloud posses my days,
I have no one to blame
If I knew exactly what to say,
I would not be feeling all this pain.
BLACK RAIN,
is here to stay!
I have lost what took long to gain.

BLACK RAIN, BLACK RAIN,
please go away!
I want my lover to come back my way.

  ~SKAT POETRY~
     Oct-1996

inspired by:  Rain Rain Go Away.... :)

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  1. Date: 7/1/2014 10:43:00 AM
    It's been an honor to read & comment once again on this superb poem and song my dearest Skat ( my fave great poet sis-friend & song writer as well). I can feel the sentiments heartily expressed here. Thank u so much for sharing & once again, many sweet congrats! Stoppin by to say Hi also & sending u & your loved ones many hugs! God bless! lovem4evrLeonora

  1. Date: 5/19/2014 10:11:00 PM
    Girl, this is great! Black rain is all that falls after heartache..

  1. Date: 2/27/2014 1:51:00 PM
    Wow.. Every thing aroung us, our writings are owesome....... I bracelet this poem .... Owesome... Xxx-Bryan'

  1. Date: 2/26/2014 9:34:00 PM
    Thank You...........SKAT

  1. Date: 2/26/2014 9:29:00 PM
    Thank You...........SKAT

  1. Date: 2/25/2014 9:39:00 AM
    emotinal overload that stuns, skat.. beautiful!.. sweet congrats on your win.. huggs

  1. Date: 2/24/2014 5:38:00 PM
    congrats on your win

  1. Date: 2/24/2014 2:31:00 PM
    Skat congratulations on your well deserve win. A heartfelt poem that expressed deep emotions. A excellent write. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 2/24/2014 3:56:00 AM
    Enjoyed your write on mood music and congrats on the win,skat

  1. Date: 2/24/2014 12:36:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win SKAT--this was a really tough batch to judge, all so well written. I appreciated yours for your mood and sense of song. Thanks for entering my contest.

  1. Date: 1/11/2014 5:17:00 PM
    I noticed your name on the list..Way to go with this winning lyrical work..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 1/10/2014 1:23:00 PM
    A very beautifully heartfelt poem and especially a song this is my dearest sis Skat. I love it sooo much. I read it many times this morning while singing it both in my heart & mind. A superb lyric & masterpiece (very precious gem) from u! Thank u so much for sharing & my hearty congratulations on your well deserved great win! lovem4evr, Leonora

  1. Date: 1/9/2014 9:05:00 AM
    This is a very well written poem Skat, Congrats on your win....Hugs...Roger

  1. Date: 1/8/2014 11:15:00 PM
    What a lovely poem and a fine win. Congrats on the win,Skat

  1. Date: 1/8/2014 3:05:00 PM
    So much emotion in this rendition....well done, and a great tribute to the song!!

  1. Date: 1/8/2014 11:16:00 AM
    A brilliant piece. Mixed emotions while reading this poem of yours. Congratulations on your win friend SKAT. Have a Happy New year to you and to your family. cheers!! :) thanks for all your support..

  1. Date: 11/1/2013 4:20:00 PM
    I can relate so well to this poem, and I think that most of us know this feeling. I could feel the deep emotion coming through your words. A really great poem, SKAT, I loved it!...Thank you so much for the nice comments, once again!

  1. Date: 9/21/2013 12:52:00 AM
    HI, there, Skat. Just dropping by to thank you for your recent comments and for the contests you and your sis are always sponsoring. it's great to see your contests!

  1. Date: 7/7/2013 5:02:00 AM
    wonderful write Skat....thanks for stopping by....hugs

  1. Date: 7/1/2013 8:34:00 PM
    This feels like a song to me. You must have been a baby when you wrote this one. You look to young to have written this in 1996. It is very good. You had talent from early on.

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