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Black Rain

~BLACK RAIN~

Another rainy stormy night,
nothing will ever feel the same.
Thunder makes me fear with fright,
Theirs no way to call your name.
To be alone is no delight,
here I am alone with shame.
It runs trough me like day and night,
lonesome here for playing my game.
I wish you where here to hold me real tight.
Forgive me for I am  the only one to blame.

A darken rainy stormy night!
Here I whither away in the BLACK RAIN!
In that selfish moment I did not realize,
all I was doing was causing myself pain.
You took and shook me with a big surprise!
And, showed me that my cheating had nothing to gain.
With you in distance I lose my self,
sitting all alone in the BLACK RAIN.

BLACK RAIN, BLACK RAIN!
Please stop the pain, its my love I want to gain.

Tears from me you wouldn't take.
It was my fault to take the fall.
It does not mean my love to you was fake.
Without you I feel real small.
The hurt runs deep~Deeper than a lake!
The hurt runs high~Higher than the tallest wall!
The hurt is heavy~something you can't shake!
The hurt is like a mystery~you can't solve at all! 
BLACK RAIN!

How these cloud posses my days,
I have no one to blame
If I knew exactly what to say,
I would not be feeling all this pain.
BLACK RAIN,
is here to stay!
I have lost what took long to gain.

BLACK RAIN, BLACK RAIN,
please go away!
I want my lover to come back my way.

  ~SKAT POETRY~
     Oct-1996

inspired by:  Rain Rain Go Away.... :)

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  1. Date: 2/27/2014 1:51:00 PM

    Wow.. Every thing aroung us, our writings are owesome....... I bracelet this poem .... Owesome... Xxx-Bryan'

  1. Date: 2/26/2014 9:34:00 PM

    Thank You...........SKAT

  1. Date: 2/26/2014 9:29:00 PM

    Thank You...........SKAT

  1. Date: 2/25/2014 9:39:00 AM

    emotinal overload that stuns, skat.. beautiful!.. sweet congrats on your win.. huggs

  1. Date: 2/24/2014 5:38:00 PM

    congrats on your win

  1. Date: 2/24/2014 2:31:00 PM

    Skat congratulations on your well deserve win. A heartfelt poem that expressed deep emotions. A excellent write. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 2/24/2014 3:56:00 AM

    Enjoyed your write on mood music and congrats on the win,skat

  1. Date: 2/24/2014 12:36:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win SKAT--this was a really tough batch to judge, all so well written. I appreciated yours for your mood and sense of song. Thanks for entering my contest.

  1. Date: 1/11/2014 5:17:00 PM

    I noticed your name on the list..Way to go with this winning lyrical work..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 1/10/2014 1:23:00 PM

    A very beautifully heartfelt poem and especially a song this is my dearest sis Skat. I love it sooo much. I read it many times this morning while singing it both in my heart & mind. A superb lyric & masterpiece (very precious gem) from u! Thank u so much for sharing & my hearty congratulations on your well deserved great win! lovem4evr, Leonora

  1. Date: 1/9/2014 9:05:00 AM

    This is a very well written poem Skat, Congrats on your win....Hugs...Roger

  1. Date: 1/8/2014 11:15:00 PM

    What a lovely poem and a fine win. Congrats on the win,Skat

  1. Date: 1/8/2014 3:05:00 PM

    So much emotion in this rendition....well done, and a great tribute to the song!!

  1. Date: 1/8/2014 11:16:00 AM

    A brilliant piece. Mixed emotions while reading this poem of yours. Congratulations on your win friend SKAT. Have a Happy New year to you and to your family. cheers!! :) thanks for all your support..

  1. Date: 11/1/2013 4:20:00 PM

    I can relate so well to this poem, and I think that most of us know this feeling. I could feel the deep emotion coming through your words. A really great poem, SKAT, I loved it!...Thank you so much for the nice comments, once again!

  1. Date: 9/21/2013 12:52:00 AM

    HI, there, Skat. Just dropping by to thank you for your recent comments and for the contests you and your sis are always sponsoring. it's great to see your contests!

  1. Date: 7/7/2013 5:02:00 AM

    wonderful write Skat....thanks for stopping by....hugs

  1. Date: 7/1/2013 8:34:00 PM

    This feels like a song to me. You must have been a baby when you wrote this one. You look to young to have written this in 1996. It is very good. You had talent from early on.

  1. Date: 6/17/2013 12:35:00 AM

    Very nicely done, the sadness of it made me feel your pain, thank you for the read

  1. Date: 6/1/2011 1:33:00 AM

    Thank you for your comment. This is really a good one!

  1. Date: 10/18/2010 11:35:00 AM

    This is beautiful and filled with such longing and pain. The remorce in it for losing your loved one of your own fault is powerful. You can definately feel the strength in this poem. More then awesome -J.R.

  1. Date: 9/29/2010 2:59:00 PM

    Hi Skat.I liked this very much.I thought it was very strong.And I felt the pain and regret conveyed in the words you used. I love poetry that touches my feelings. Thanks for your own comments. Luv June(to soup friends)

  1. Date: 9/12/2010 2:43:00 PM

    Reminds me of, "Rainy Night in Georgia" SKAT! Black rain, black rain, ease my pain, releive me this vain, what have you to gain, only my pain. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 9/11/2010 10:48:00 AM

    Love the 5th Stanza. A powerful apologetic poem.

  1. Date: 9/6/2010 4:45:00 PM

    thank you Scat for yourcomments- I enjoyed reading thispoem... excellent write.

  1. Date: 9/6/2010 12:16:00 PM

    AMAZING WRITE !!!!! wish all the best and thank u for ur commet on my poem :) love louzana

  1. Date: 9/2/2010 5:38:00 PM

    Skat, you are a natural born lyricist. I have come to that conclusion. I just started making up music to this as I rerad it. It conveys the confusion and pain really well! Thank you asa always! Gerard.

  1. Date: 9/1/2010 9:11:00 PM

    OK I see u had to combine your contest.. so its OK and hope u don't mind if it spoiled your idea.. all we can do is try my BBF and u are so good at getting things done on soup..luv.. thankxxx again..

  1. Date: 9/1/2010 1:29:00 AM

    What a sad but very meaningful poem, Irma -- I really liked your metaphor here -- keep on writing please!! --nikko :)

  1. Date: 8/30/2010 5:44:00 AM

    Irma, Thunder and heavy rain can seem so scary and would seem to add to tears of pain, yet here in Hawaii it doesn't thunder when it rains most always and the rain brings me joy, but I do understand what you mean in your introspective poem. Blessings, Connie

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