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"Consummation"

Prepare thus the bride chamber,
Good ointment smell doeth linger.
No kiss of mouth sweet as thine,
Naught compares to her passion’s wine.

By my side my beauty bride,
My rapture I cannot hide.
She opens her gown seam,
Beauty reveals as a dream,

My flower I see in thy skirt,
With thy sweet nectar I flirt.
With strokes of passion we toy,
With bursts of pleasure we Joy.


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  1. Date: 3/26/2011 10:20:00 PM

    and here is the other one. Sexy!

  1. Date: 3/17/2011 8:18:00 AM

    Congrats on your poetry making it past the first round John X two!!

  1. Date: 3/9/2011 11:14:00 AM

    Congratulations on your poetry X2 making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Moses. Love Carol

  1. Date: 3/8/2011 1:56:00 AM

    wow. congrats!

  1. Date: 3/7/2011 12:33:00 PM

    Many congrats on your well deserved two first round successes John - Luv Janette

  1. Date: 3/6/2011 6:18:00 PM

    Congrats Moses on your first round success in the Poetry Soup contest luv...

  1. Date: 1/16/2011 1:51:00 PM

    Moses.. can hardly read your blog luv.. and your contest does not show finalized yet.. so could u let me know if u already judged ..thankxx my friend...

  1. Date: 1/13/2011 9:49:00 AM

    Congratulations on your featured poem this week John. May you have many more. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/12/2011 5:10:00 PM

    Congrats Moses on the featured write. God Bless. Vince

  1. Date: 1/9/2011 6:24:00 PM

    Congrats Moses on your featured poem this week on the Soup my friend... a great one to share with us all with luv..

  1. Date: 1/9/2011 3:58:00 PM

    This was one of those that I missed, John. Congratulations on your fine win...didn't even know of this contest! Nevertheless, this is a beautiful sensual poem. Hope you have had a good day. Love, Audrey

  1. Date: 9/27/2010 6:11:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win John in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "Epithalamium" Love,Carol

  1. Date: 9/19/2010 9:25:00 PM

    oh what a lovely poem. many congratulations. Thanks for your kind comments.

  1. Date: 9/19/2010 2:33:00 PM

    John congratulations on your success in Dr. Ram's contest. ;) hope your Sunday is a blessed one bb Wilma

  1. Date: 9/19/2010 7:25:00 AM

    John, many congratulations on your win in Dr.Ram's contest with this fine piece >> James

  1. Date: 9/19/2010 7:09:00 AM

    Congrats Moses on your great win in Dr. Ram's contest .. an exceptional write .. enjoy your wonderful win this happy Sunday my friend with luv..

  1. Date: 9/19/2010 6:23:00 AM

    Congratulations for your super win in my contest. I really love the title consummation, John. And thanks for your help to finalize the contest.

  1. Date: 8/24/2010 3:22:00 PM

    John, I admire your craft here. It is erotic and teasing, but not self conscious. That IS NOT easy to pull off. You did. My kudos and thank you as always. Regards, Gerard.

  1. Date: 8/20/2010 5:39:00 PM

    this is beautiful, Moses. what a work of passion & joyous love..<3 a wonderful time for these lovers, and a write cherished from above... i admire this poem. ~Always&Forever Lynette

  1. Date: 8/19/2010 11:09:00 PM

    wow, this is very good, so different from many of the wedding poems' topics. A very sensual write from you. Good luck in the contest. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 8/19/2010 11:09:00 PM

    a fav!

  1. Date: 8/19/2010 4:33:00 PM

    Good luck in the contest with this passionate write ...Reads like a winner..Sara

  1. Date: 8/19/2010 2:40:00 PM

    This was a fabulous read.I don't always leave a comments but just need to say your work is just wonderful I really enjoy reading you.Teresa

  1. Date: 8/19/2010 11:32:00 AM

    Oh how nice and romantic. best of luck to you in the contest. Thank you for the lovely reviews of my poems. Have a great day, Shirley

  1. Date: 8/19/2010 11:20:00 AM

    very beautiful and romantic! This is one of your better works I think!

  1. Date: 8/19/2010 11:20:00 AM

    Knowing u are here in spirit Moses is an inspiration to me.. good luck with the remodeling.. see my two blogs as of this morning .. ciao from Italy..luv..

  1. Date: 8/19/2010 10:50:00 AM

    This must be a winner. It is a delightful piece John. I do wish you the best in the contest but I think it is a winner. Thank you for your kinds comments. I was to late to get into your last contest but I did have one written it is titled Silly Man. It was the first Cherihew I ever wrote. Some day when you have time will you read and let me know if I did it correctly. Thank you. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/19/2010 3:01:00 AM

    Beautiful and unique write John, all the best for the contest.. love Wilma

  1. Date: 8/18/2010 7:31:00 PM

    Very unique and wonderful Moses my friend.. good luck ..Dr. Ram will LUV this piece.. enjoyed .. with luv from italy..ciao..

  1. Date: 8/18/2010 7:25:00 PM

    What a lovely and beautiful expressions so romantic and so much enchanting. Great write and a lovely gift for our most dear friend. Love and best wishes always...........Ravindra......John Freeman

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