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  1. Date: 8/26/2010 7:25:00 PM
    strange to be taken in to worlds far way.nice"

  1. Date: 8/22/2010 3:07:00 PM
    My Dear "Sister Spirit" Lynette, YOUR SPIRIT floated me through the Most Amazing POETRY I have read in my Life Do YOU have this Journal Published YOU Should I Admire YOUR " SPIRIT " LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Spirit Brother...Harry

  1. Date: 8/20/2010 8:47:00 PM
    Lynette, thanks for reading all my poems like that when I have no more of yours to comment to. That is so funny my limerick got you to google Dr.Kildare, hahaha. You are right. he was not all THAT and certainly was not MY fantasy growing up. hahaha. lUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 8/20/2010 1:58:00 AM
    definitely enjoyed how you ended this one, very sweet and touching-- you've woven a wonderful story here --do keep on writing, ok?? nikko :) PS> I love rainy days too :)

  1. Date: 8/19/2010 11:49:00 PM
    ~ "Simply Captivates Others Amid 'Your Beautiful Aura & Light That Fills, Your Precious Eyes!!!'" ~ Smile, "Beyond Beautiful Lynette, Within Every Possible Way &, Another Fave" that, I am sure that I shall read again, more than once ~ "My Love & Warmth to You Always &, to All You Love," John! ~ Smile, "Have The Most Beautiful of Tomorrows, Wrapped Within The Fragrance of Beauty & Love;" Bye Dear Lady!:) ~

  1. Date: 8/19/2010 11:43:00 PM
    Smile ~ One thought amongst a few which stands out amid my mind in regards to "This Brilliant Painting of Your" here is, my wondering if this young lad within it has any future significance unto "Yourself" perhaps? And if so then, I should count him extremely blessed and fortunate to be able to someday say so; for, as I have sincerely believed and said afore unto "Your Loveliness;" there is something so amazing about "Your Beautiful Heart & Soul" that ~ ....Cont:)

  1. Date: 8/19/2010 11:33:00 PM
    Smile ~ "So Very Soft & Lovely Lynette; Just As I Was Earlier Thinking Is 'Your Beautiful Soul!!!'" ~ You know when I first met "Your Splendors" here at Soup dear lady, I truly did not gaze upon "Your Words" as I do now and, I am quite certain that I missed a lot of opportunities to have been somewhat blessed had I done so and yet, when I find the time I shall surely review they again; beyond even the slightest of doubts ~ ....Cont:)

  1. Date: 8/19/2010 4:54:00 PM

  1. Date: 8/19/2010 10:26:00 AM
    Breathtaking my dear friend. I am so happy to have been able to read it all today. Thank you Lynette. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/18/2010 9:58:00 PM
    aaaah, this is very sweet. Lovely writing, LYnette. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 8/18/2010 9:31:00 PM
    You're so very good Lynette! A little reminiscing! Sweet! Thanks for reading my poem and leaving comments. It's far from my best. Been too busy lately and I hate being away but my absence is a necessity for a while. Thanks again! Peace, love, Audrey

  1. Date: 8/18/2010 9:15:00 PM
    Hello Lynette,,A very powerful journal you have! Lynette, the ending could work out with a good vision of meeting beyond all wonders, Nice!!! and strong,..p.d.

  1. Date: 8/18/2010 7:55:00 PM
    Thankxxx Lynette for all your wonderful and precious comments tonight.. see my new blog for prayer for my youngest son.. rushed to the OR for appendectomy tonight luv.. prayers please.. thankxx luv..

  1. Date: 8/18/2010 5:31:00 PM
    enjoyed reading this poem...romantic work.

  1. Date: 8/18/2010 4:00:00 PM
    How sad this little girl was missing her parents, but the kiss her friend gave her must have brought great comfort. This is the agape love that John Freeman speaks of and you conveyed your message with tenderness and beautiful imagery. God bless you for sharing this with us. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 8/18/2010 3:27:00 PM
    Wonderful write Lynette... romantic undertone.. with a captivating titile sweets... enjoyed from Italy..ciao..

  1. Date: 8/18/2010 2:14:00 PM
    So inviting a write. Feelings of romace but very sublte..Sara