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First Kiss..:Last Enigma:. First Part. .

The Small Girl was with Her Grandmother
In the Place where She now Resides,
Spending the Blissful Day with 
Her Childhood Best Friend.
Gazing Upon the Soft Droplets of the
Sunsets Cherishing Waterfalls,
It’s Beauty Painted a Picture of Wonder in Her Mind.
One that She would Hold Onto 
Until the Moment Came where She would Portray it 
Down onto Paper,
She Thought it would be Great, 
Since Her Grandmother had taken Her & Her Friend
In the Great Outdoors,
For the Midst of Nature’s Day.
The Small Girl Looked up at the Sky. .
Once She Felt an Essence quite Familiar,
There was nothing there.
But in the Air around Her, 
She knew it was the Presence of Her Spirit Mother.
She turned Her Grandmother’s way who 
Smiled at Her,
In Return to Her Glance. .
Showing Sign that She Felt it too.
As The Day Passed by Onto Sundown, 
They were Home. .while Drawing a Sketch with 
Her Childhood Best Friend
In Their Journal, She began to 
Release the Image that was Kept Within.
As it Revealed a Fiery Red Sunset,
That Intertwined with a Soft Mocha Brown. .
It was there to Symbolize the
Great Wisdom that Shines through to 
Her Grandmother’s Eyes, and Far into Her Soul.
There Showed the Drawings of a Spirit Father. .
Gifted with the Aura of a Chief, Only in His Heart
For the Core of His Loyalty that Held His Warmth,
And True Promise.
Beside Him was the Nature of a Mother
Drawn with Purely Deep Eyes. .
As if it were to Convey the very Far Depths 
Of Her Ancient Soul.
Then there Followed a Spirit Daughter. .
Bestowed with Butterfly Wings. .
Flourished in Luminescent Hues that Held
Her Treasured Spirit.
Resembling the Face of Her Mother. .
And the Pierce of Her Father’s Hazel Eyes.
There was a Road. .
To Unveil the Journey in which they 
Wandered by Foot,
To Reach that Wise Sunset. .
As She Came to an End with this Significant Image,
It was set Apart. .
To Show Her Grandmother before the End of the Night.


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  1. Date: 10/5/2010 6:12:00 AM

    Very descriptive and expressive write...I am glad that I chose this one as one to read today...I don't know how I had missed it when reading your work..It is like a fairy tale...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

  1. Date: 8/28/2010 9:39:00 AM

    Congrats on your poem being featured this week:) Emily

  1. Date: 8/26/2010 9:28:00 PM

    congrat, on your featured poem of the week"

  1. Date: 8/26/2010 8:03:00 AM

    Hello Lynette, nice & congratulation for having your poem featured this week . It is an awesome poem,..p.d.

  1. Date: 8/26/2010 7:55:00 AM

    HI LYNETTE,GONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR POEM BEING FEATURED THIS WEEK~SKAT~

  1. Date: 8/23/2010 9:40:00 AM

    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Lynette. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/23/2010 5:49:00 AM

    Lynette, congrats on the featured poem this week! well written!

  1. Date: 8/22/2010 7:34:00 PM

    Lynette, This is a really beautiful and touching poem being featured. Congratulations! Aloha, Connie

  1. Date: 8/22/2010 4:23:00 PM

    Congrats Lynette my friend.. sweetie.. on your featured poem this week on the Soup... a great one to share with us all... well its official..am married.. now am Mrs. "Sweetheart"...with luv..ciao..

  1. Date: 8/22/2010 1:51:00 PM

    Dear "Sister Spirit" Lynette, Such a Beautiful Remembrance YOU carry the reader from beginning to END Astounding Write I wrote a Dedication to YOU LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Brother SPIRIT...Harry

  1. Date: 8/20/2010 1:56:00 AM

    You sure have a way with words Lynette, it just has this sort of "mystical" feel to it for me-- let me read the 2nd part now...

  1. Date: 8/19/2010 11:26:00 PM

    Ps. Smile ~ "Ow," and before I forget and move on to part two of "This Magical Masterpiece Dear Lady," I wish to "Thank You" for once more, "Your" kind coms for, I find within them that, the more of "Your Brightness" I do behold, the deeper "Your Light" seems to penetrate my perceptions soul ~ So "Thank You Dear" ~ Smile, now, on we go....

  1. Date: 8/19/2010 11:16:00 PM

    Smile ~ The Sunsets Waterfalls; The Essence; The One With Nature; The Father The Mother The Daughter, On & On ~ "Astonishingly Amazingly Beautiful Dear Lynette; Just Like You!!!" ~ And of course; beyond Any doubt; A fave ~ Allow myself to go and reread part two once more dear lady ~ "My Love & Warmth to You & All You Love, Always & Forever," John!:) ~ Smile, off we go...."Beautiful Lynette" ~

  1. Date: 8/19/2010 11:09:00 PM

    Smile ~ "Beautiful" ~ "Hello Precious, Gifted & Lovely Lynette Chachere!!!" ~ You know I read this wonderfully image laced and brilliantly colourful splendid poem yesterday dear lady and yet, found not the time to com its beautifulness ~ It almost causes myself to ponder if not, this could have been a vision of "Your" own dear lady? Smile, and yet ~ ....Cont:)

  1. Date: 8/19/2010 4:52:00 PM

    A WoNDERFUL PoEM 2 READ LYNN, tAKE CARE & ENJOY YoUR SELF*luv~SKAT

  1. Date: 8/19/2010 10:17:00 AM

    This will have a new home in my favorites Lynette. It stirred my heart so. I do not want to miss the continance. Thank you for sharing your writing. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/18/2010 9:57:00 PM

    A beautiful beginning, Lynette. Let's go now to see how it continues.. .

  1. Date: 8/18/2010 9:09:00 PM

    Lynette, I am gonna be straight forward with you. I miss your poetry, the deep mysterious one. Like this one, LOL.. I know you have other good poems recently,LOL but too NOT YOU!!!! LOL. Now this is you..Love it,, A nice presence to have around when you are surrounded by loved ones. A nice grace of spirit to pick up them smiles..Nice,..p.d.

  1. Date: 8/18/2010 3:58:00 PM

    What a beautiful story told in verse, Lynette, I'll have to check out part two!