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" In Maudlin Verse "

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" In Maudlin Verse "

In maudlin verse his tale was told,
Of sailors, ships or captains bold.
Naught for us but fancy seemed,
Thought mayhap 'twas what he'd dreamed.

Of sea or song or adventure grand,
We listened well all us of land.
As wind caressed our mountains old,
In maudlin verse his tale was told.

In hope of journey without end,
We all to him our ears did lend.
Thus we found our hearts he rent,
In maudlin verse our day he spent.

His eyes were clouds upon a sea,
His voice cold wind of yesterday.
We found his tale more a plea,
In maudlin verse so swept away.

To us he spoke of sights so seen,
Of wonders imagined in deepest dream.
Of times of riches or days of lean,
To us his tale real did seem.

As he spoke dark clouds did gather,
Wind once swift now grew slack.
Sky once blue took hue of black,
In maudlin verse his tale he'd rather.

Worlds unknown yet discovered,
Moons above us the while hovered.
Maudlin was his tale that day,
Our very hearts so did he stay.

SeaWolf
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  1. Date: 4/10/2011 10:52:00 AM

    Hi Seawolf- Loved the rhythm of your piece and the way you gave your old sea-dog life.Congratulations on this being a winner.Luv June(Sylvia)

  1. Date: 4/1/2011 11:46:00 AM

    Excellent words that I can understand and actually have a tangible meaning! Great work, well constructed.

  1. Date: 3/31/2011 5:34:00 PM

    Another chance to read this one again and say congrats again. Great poem. Vince

  1. Date: 3/31/2011 5:36:00 AM

    I knew this would be on the winners circle. MANY CONGRATS, SeaWolf. I am an old sea dog myself. Elaine

  1. Date: 3/30/2011 1:56:00 PM

    Such meter, so well done it makes me want to memorize it along beside the Children's Hour by Longfellow :) Marvelous win! Light & Love

  1. Date: 3/30/2011 6:16:00 AM

    Congratulations on your 7th place win in the PoetrySoup International Poetry Contest Seawolf. I enjoyed reading your poem again this morning. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/29/2011 7:04:00 PM

    Congratulaitons on your big win with this worthy sea tale. Enjoy the honor. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 3/29/2011 3:10:00 AM

    A sentimental journey indeed. Well done ballad! Many congrats on this delightful feature of the week. Elaine

  1. Date: 3/28/2011 6:56:00 AM

    Congratulations on your well deserved featured poem this week Seawolf. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/27/2011 6:35:00 PM

    Congrats twice in 3 months. Still love this one. Vince

  1. Date: 3/27/2011 6:14:00 PM

    Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Caribbean

  1. Date: 3/9/2011 4:01:00 AM

    Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Caribbean Seawolf. Love Carol

  1. Date: 1/13/2011 10:09:00 AM

    Congratulations on your featured poem this week Seawolf. May you have many more. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/11/2011 7:02:00 PM

    Congrats on the featured ballad. Vince

  1. Date: 1/9/2011 5:51:00 PM

    congratulation on being featured this week! this was a great poem, the flow of it was captivating, i could not tear my eyes away. i loved the way it read. this is a piece to be proud of. i particularly like the opening stanza. well done and congratulations again! --Madison

  1. Date: 8/16/2010 11:03:00 AM

    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week SeaWolf. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/15/2010 6:09:00 PM

    Congrats on your poem " In Maudlin Verse " being featured this week, enjoyed the read..P.D.

  1. Date: 8/15/2010 1:55:00 PM

    Congrats SeaWolf on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great piece to share with us all..with luv..