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Relationships

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Relationships

Relationships…..
A beautiful bond between people..
few are lucky enough to find * understand it
But very few are lucky enough to actually keep it..hold onto it
Nothin in the world exists immortallly
And so cant relationships.
Realtionships make -
Relationships break.
People; no matter how strong they are…
If they were ever attached to someone truly
Will alyways remember thm even after the relation is over.
Because no matter how serious the break up would be
Or how crucial the end of it wud be ….
There's always a scent..
That lingers around for a while…
There's always a vision…
Of all those moments in which those people would have lived the moments of their life.
There's always a desperation…
To feel that touch again…
A desire to just be with that one person again…
A desire of togetherness where the heart may prosper again…
There's always a hope…..
That maybe their bonding was really strong enough to get it all back...
BUT whn tht hope breaks!
It shatters the persons heart 
And breaks the person so brutally 
That theres no more left in it to move on with someone else
No more left in the heart to give to someone else
No more left in the eyes to share with others…
The person is jst devastated n miserable in itself
The person is lik a living deAD…
The soul is still in there…but is barely alive…
No one can fyt fate…!

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  1. Date: 9/6/2010 1:37:00 PM
    Well, thank u very much Connie !! =]

  1. Date: 8/31/2010 3:06:00 PM
    Salwa, your words drip with pain in this poignant piece. Unless one has experienced this torture, they cannot conceive of its debilitating affects. Beautifully written! A warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Aloha, Connie

  1. Date: 8/13/2010 6:49:00 PM
    thnk u !!

  1. Date: 8/13/2010 6:25:00 PM
    VERY DEEP THE FRIENDSHIP MEANING IS VERY STRONG IN YOUR POEM. ENJOYED YOUR POEM*lv~SKAT