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  1. Date: 8/31/2010 7:40:00 PM
    An enjoyement~SKAT

  1. Date: 8/21/2010 1:55:00 AM
    wow, Scott what a unique take for the contest-- I really liked how you referenced "An eye for an eye and tooth for a tooth" here...very clever and so true indeed --very sad and true-- actually my turn now-- this senryu of yours now reminds me of my own write about war-- please check out Stolen Souls-- thanks-- bye again-- nikko :)

  1. Date: 8/14/2010 11:59:00 PM
    I really liked the last line. Charles.

  1. Date: 8/14/2010 12:22:00 AM
    wow, very intersting, Scott and powerful in this little poem!! goodnight now, Andrea

  1. Date: 8/13/2010 2:18:00 PM
    Interesting write that should do well in the contest..Good luck..Sara

  1. Date: 8/13/2010 10:35:00 AM
    Another day of reading the many diverse poems here at the Soup. I enjoyed reading yours today Scott and the best to you in the contest. Have a wonderful weekend. I need to see if I can find some inspiration this weekend. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/13/2010 3:17:00 AM
    Well said Senryu. War leaves so much behind.