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Summer is Over (Haiku)

For The Summer is Over Haiku contest:

Sunsets come early
Leaves fade and begin to fall
Too soon summer flees

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  1. Date: 9/3/2010 6:01:00 PM

    Too soon indeed =) Great Haiku. Good luck! Looking forward to reading more of your work. Farah

  1. Date: 8/23/2010 9:25:00 AM

    Thanks everyone for the comments! The reality of this poem is definitely hitting home as the leaves begin to fall....sigh...the season was too short as always!

  1. Date: 8/23/2010 9:21:00 AM

    Yes, they do and we lose trhe light far too soon. Almost a metaphor for life? Thank you for your gracious remark. Regards, Gerard

  1. Date: 8/13/2010 9:26:00 AM

    ~No tell me it is not so~Another day of reading the many diverse poems here at the Soup. I enjoyed reading yours today T.L. Have a wonderful weekend. I need to see if I can find some inspiration this weekend. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/12/2010 9:00:00 PM

    A nice write on summer is over, T.L.

  1. Date: 8/12/2010 4:11:00 PM

    Wonderful entry T.L. good luck in Irma's new contest.. lots of imagery in your lines.. my entry is "Fond Farewell"..luv..

  1. Date: 8/12/2010 2:38:00 PM

    well written, good luck..