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I Never Knew

The battle was won

It was over and done

The victory is you

But I never knew



The tears were wept

Darkness came and crept

It dragged life through

But I never knew



No emotion in your eyes

Always showing hidden lies

It was always all just untrue

But I never knew



All could see the hurt shows

Did you know everybody knows?

It never came and hit me out of the blue

But I never knew



Tell me, was it worth going through?

Because I was the one who never knew


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  1. Date: 8/20/2010 2:39:00 AM

    I loved your poem chriss it had so much life and thought to it well done and keep up the great work :) Love kareena

  1. Date: 8/11/2010 8:24:00 AM

    How sad that you were the last to learn of the deception, Chris. This happens so often to people with kind, sincere hearts and it can be very hurtful. I hope you find someone who returns your love and sincerity. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 8/11/2010 6:09:00 AM

    Excellent write, deepest feelings exposed.. ~ Wilma

  1. Date: 8/11/2010 5:22:00 AM

    Very nice write on deep feelings, Chris

  1. Date: 8/11/2010 1:14:00 AM

    excellent poem this, deepest of feeling. Harry