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*he MURDERED me*

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*he MURDERED me*

   he murdered me

I am 21 years old.
I lay here with my body cold

I always gave him the best of me.
Begging for his love on my knee.

I never listened to nobody's advice.
Only to my husbands lies.

He told me that he loved me. 
Beating me till I could no longer see.
 
One day he took me by surprise.
Now everyone around me cries.

It's to late to see he was not the right guy.
It's to late to tell all my loved ones goodbye.

Now I'm in a place where he can't touch me.
In a box called a coffin, only I see..

While you stay and rot behind in jail..
God came and took me away from your hell.

By; P.D.

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  1. Date: 4/24/2011 3:52:00 PM

    Wow P.D., This is powerful! So true for too many. And for many, this "happy ending" never comes compared to their endless hell.

  1. Date: 3/17/2011 9:44:00 AM

    P.D. This one is cool. I like the line: "It's TOO late to see he was not the right guy. It's TOO late to tell all my loved ones goodbye." Nice flow. ~JS Lambert

  1. Date: 1/9/2011 10:26:00 AM

    thanks for you comment on my poem i really like this one of yours keep the good work

  1. Date: 12/18/2010 5:36:00 AM

    how many times has this came true. john

  1. Date: 11/9/2010 5:24:00 PM

    Nice job! Love powerful themes like this one. I hope it wasn't a personal experience that inspired it, like a loved one who is the deceased in your piece, but this was fantastic, love it!

  1. Date: 10/16/2010 3:04:00 PM

    thnx for your comment on my poetry...i really enjoyed this poem...so many ppl have been in this situation...continue speaking the truths of life, J'Nicole

  1. Date: 9/10/2010 3:28:00 PM

    i commented on this before but it is an extraordinary write...love it

  1. Date: 9/3/2010 4:34:00 PM

    thanks for your comment on my poem..love faith joy..i wasnt sure were to say thank you at..anyway..i really like this poem..it just made me think of my cousin who died on 7.28.06 at the hands of her boyfriend..wow..i mean this one really hit home..and she was the same age as well..her birthday is this month..anyway..i really enjoyed this poem..like i said it hit home..

  1. Date: 9/2/2010 1:30:00 PM

    WOW...THIS WAS SO........ JUS WOW..MY ALL TIME FAV...NICE WORK... :)shelly

  1. Date: 8/29/2010 2:28:00 AM

    Oh very interesting! it is a very lovely poem indeed! Special;y, when going through the lines: I always gave him the best of me. Begging for his love on my knee., I felt warmth of your love. May God turn your boyfriend Stronger!!! wishing u a hot and happy weekend, Aejaz

  1. Date: 8/23/2010 12:52:00 PM

    way too many peps can relate to this on way too many levels.....Good job! Perfect timing for me watched Lovely Bones last night. OK ,movie, EXCELLENT book!

  1. Date: 8/20/2010 4:35:00 AM

    Wow, p.d., what a moving poem! Very well written and enjoyed the read although this is really a trgic write. It happens so often!!!! Thank you so much for your comments which I appreciate! Have a nice weekend1...Gert

  1. Date: 8/15/2010 8:32:00 PM

    Thank you so much ....try wasting 10 years it will literally make you sick and I still get harrassed by him but GOD is so good.He protects me and he literally took me out of that situation.It took all I had to leave but I would not trade it for anything.Just forgive him and move on it will be the best choice you could make.

  1. Date: 8/15/2010 8:12:00 PM

    GOD is good I can relate to this it took me 10 years to finally be set free from that good women deserve better...Glad you got out ...GOD BLESS

  1. Date: 8/15/2010 9:33:00 AM

    very intriguing poem, it's got a nice rhyme and wit..take care..

  1. Date: 8/15/2010 6:21:00 AM

    Wow! This poem takes me back to myself as a battered young mother. I said a prayer after reading it, just to say thanks again for my survival.

  1. Date: 8/14/2010 10:34:00 AM

    You would write something like this wouldn't you lol, but I'll give it to ya this is pretty darn creative, but I like the ending cause she got a chance to free herself from him, No man should have to end things like that, well she's better off where he can't lay a hand on her, =(^.^)=Royal

  1. Date: 8/14/2010 9:56:00 AM

    Wow! This is a very compelling write, PD. Domestic abuse is an ugly thing. Take care Always!

  1. Date: 8/14/2010 6:08:00 AM

    Just saying "hi" on a Saturday in the sky .. with my cell by my side.. trillions of miles high.. how is my BBF today ... hope OK .. happy weekend .. as I confront my destiny luv.. your BBF..

  1. Date: 8/14/2010 12:25:00 AM

    deepest of feeling here for me reading this, abuse is such a tragedy, the poem is awesome, the subject scary. Harry

  1. Date: 8/13/2010 7:00:00 PM

    just dropping by to say hi pd :) see you around :) hope you're having a great evening-- :)

  1. Date: 8/13/2010 4:17:00 AM

    oh,,,good i read this one...it just so happened that my friend experience this kind of stuff...great work pd...^_^ v

  1. Date: 8/12/2010 9:36:00 PM

    I thought it would offend the clown from IT. hahaha

  1. Date: 8/12/2010 6:00:00 PM

    geez... the author needed to give air to this emotional heartache! love it! jimbo

  1. Date: 8/12/2010 3:24:00 PM

    Except now Bubba is beating him for wearing his lip stick to bed with him:) It's not always the man you know, the biggest killer of little old men is little old women...it's called prostate cancer, check it out!

  1. Date: 8/12/2010 12:21:00 PM

    Hi Destroyer ((Poet: Excellent way 2 get the message of abuse across. Alot of people (including the victims) turn a blind eye to this type of crime, until it is 2 late. BRAVO!!! Thanks once again for taking the time 2 read and comment on my poetry. Peace: Sheol

  1. Date: 8/11/2010 10:27:00 PM

    LOL;) THeY WHeRe 2 THe BiG *T*LOVE YA~SKAT

  1. Date: 8/11/2010 1:26:00 PM

    this is great PD very storng every line

  1. Date: 8/11/2010 10:39:00 AM

    hi there pd :) glad my spell check mind can make you smile ;) maybe I should have my mind checked though?? hope you're having a great day! -- nikko :)

  1. Date: 8/11/2010 10:33:00 AM

    good write pd. I just wrote one that takes up exactly where yours left off. I'll send you a copy if you want but I don't think I'll put it on the soup until a contest comes up i can use it in. you have soup mail

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