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**REFLECTION**

**REFLECTION**

I am running through a wheat dream
Open skies, body lies, my face cries
Surrounded by a  silver stream
I stumbled  in the valley where sleepiness never dies
A manger on fire, burning up my steam
Hardly ever got around to my good-bye's

I wake up alone in the middle of a field
Rain falling from the sky blessing my soul
Above the silver lining of my cloud
I place a bouquet of flowers on your grave
Angered by the thought of my birth
After life are we still saved

Rescuing you by the hand
Happy tormented in life's final way
Silent mistreated never to understand
A rid of hate dooming everyday
Something as evil, can ruin your plot at hand
My mouth hit by the door, on my knees when I pray
A ricochet shoot, when he revealed my plan
Fallen in and out with an unwanted betray
Alone with my own reflection is where I stand

                 *SKAT*

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  1. Date: 4/28/2013 12:53:00 PM

    Genius poem. Enjoyed a lot and felt very nice in heart. It's one of my favorite poem. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 1:18:00 PM

    THIS WAS A TOUCHING READ, YOU WERE RIGHT... A GOOD PIC FOR A FAVORITE. I ENJOYED READING IT VERY MUCH. THANK YOU

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 8:20:00 AM

    Hello my dearest Skat! Thank you so much for stopping by and your congratulatory comments on my win. I'm so touched and honored. Thank you so much for sharing also this amazing piece/precious gems of yours. Good night and God bless you and your family! HUGS! love always and forever, Leonora

  1. Date: 9/29/2010 1:43:00 PM

    a lot of deep emotion here, keep persevering life is one hard battle, this is the best way to illuminate, good one! don't get enough time to enjoy it all will look in again

  1. Date: 9/12/2010 2:35:00 PM

    A way with words with this one SKAT. A cool Job! Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 9/6/2010 4:16:00 PM

    Wow Skat this one I'll frame in my favs. Awesome

  1. Date: 9/1/2010 9:42:00 PM

    gosh, I don't remember reading this one. I really like it, Irma, and thanks so much for the haiku win. It was an inspiration for me, your contest. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 8/31/2010 9:10:00 PM

    This poem is very powerful and brilliant. It expresses a mixture of thoughts and emotions. Always, Farah

  1. Date: 8/22/2010 9:53:00 AM

    Smile ~ I just returned to let "Your Brightness" know that, I favoured "Your Brilliance As Lovely & Gifted Poetess" because, it is where "You" belong ~ Smile, "Bye Again Dear!:) ~

  1. Date: 8/22/2010 9:36:00 AM

    Smile ~ "Hello Precious, Gifted & Beautiful Skat!!!" ~ I want to "Thank You" for "Your Beautiful Com" yesterday; a joy to see "Your Loveliness" and, this poem is sooo profound and, "Sooo Seemingly Sad Yet Wonderful; 'A Reflection of You Dear; Very Beautiful!!!'" ~ "My Love & Warmth to You Always &, to All You Love," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very Beautiful Day Dear, Amid The Silver Streams of Love; Bye Precious Skat!:) ~

  1. Date: 8/22/2010 9:26:00 AM

    Smile ~ You know I read this slowly twice dear and yet still, I could not truly gather the clarity of this moment which "Your Brilliant Brush" has painted although, I do not believe that we as readers need to behold such clarity of understanding all at times as much as, embracing the soul of the writers own as, we breathe them into ourselves a bit deeper within, every precious and beautiful word that they speak ~ ....Cont:)

  1. Date: 8/19/2010 4:57:00 PM

    another great poem! very visual, put together really niice!

  1. Date: 8/18/2010 4:53:00 PM

    hi Irma, I hope you're having a happy week with your fam, & time to yourself.peace(: ~Always&Forever Lynette

  1. Date: 8/15/2010 1:15:00 PM

    Truly is an epic, SKAT. Well composed and inspirational poem!

  1. Date: 8/14/2010 11:10:00 AM

    Beautiful one mom, if only i had your kind of inspiration lol, =(^.^)=Royal

  1. Date: 8/13/2010 9:05:00 PM

    That was beautiful."Rain falling from the sky blessing my soul" good use of diction

  1. Date: 8/12/2010 1:59:00 PM

    What an insightful reflection! Thank you for commenting on my poems and thanks again for my poem "Oil Spilled Out" being in the winner's circle! Love, Susan Mills

  1. Date: 8/12/2010 9:56:00 AM

    Intresting work! Keep 'em coming! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 8/12/2010 8:17:00 AM

    Nice job...Jimmy

  1. Date: 8/11/2010 3:53:00 PM

    Just stopping by to say "hi" to my BBF S.K.A.T. ..and see what u are up to like a busy bee... me too ..taking off on Friday morning for Italy .. wedding on the 22nd of this month... so good luck with your contest my friend... Arrividerci Roma..luv..

  1. Date: 8/11/2010 1:15:00 AM

    just saying HI! Skat :) super thanks for your comments in my poem :) enjoy your day ^_^ -- nikko :)

  1. Date: 8/10/2010 7:21:00 PM

    A beautiful painting of love, hopes and despair in this lovely write my friend. The last line ' Alone with my own reflection is where I stand' is a brilliant piece of writing which touches very deep. And many thank for your precious comments on Patradoot The Messenger 28. Love and best wishes always..........Ravindra......S K A T.

  1. Date: 8/10/2010 7:10:00 PM

    this is interesting & the words a dark. makes you wonder what exactly this dream means, by being alone with your own reflection after 'death'. & hi to you too, Irma(: hope your day is a blast. ~Always&Forever Lynette

  1. Date: 8/10/2010 3:34:00 PM

    "Alone with my own reflection is where I stand." Ultimately, yes! But, meanwhile _______ Love, Dave

  1. Date: 8/8/2010 8:48:00 AM

    Stark imagery Irma, hope you are enjoying your weekend, thank you for your comment on "the birds and the bees" luv Wilma

  1. Date: 8/8/2010 7:20:00 AM

    Really happy you have a new poem again, keep on writing ok?? What a very intriguing poem and dream, Skat--wow, truly enjoyed how vivid it is-- and super thanks for dropping by my poems, you are such a sweetie to do so :) -- enjoy your coming week! -- nikko :)

  1. Date: 8/8/2010 5:46:00 AM

    Very eye grabbling write, keeps the reader attention. thanks for congrats on my Haiku win.. always Michael

  1. Date: 8/7/2010 10:36:00 PM

    Lots of doom and gloom in this one. I loved the imagery in that first stanza, Irma. And great final line too! thanks for posting this new one for me to see! LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 8/7/2010 7:24:00 PM

    Oi, stranger than strange,..p.d.

  1. Date: 8/7/2010 6:22:00 PM

    enjoyed reading!!

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