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Lost in Japan

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Below is the poem entitled Lost in Japan which was written by poet iolanda Scripca. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Lost in Japan

Origami soul
Pressed in rice paper tightly
A tomb of beauty
Memory of Geisha's heart
Tsunami tears in albums...

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  1. Date: 8/17/2011 8:05:00 PM

    Exquisite! Congratulations on your deserving win Iolanda.

  1. Date: 8/3/2011 9:27:00 PM

    So delicate and lovely. I'm happy for your win.

    Scripca Avatar iolanda Scripca Date: 8/3/2011 10:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Elisabeth!
  1. Date: 8/1/2011 3:13:00 PM

    I Love how u wrote this poem. how simply beautiful

    Scripca Avatar iolanda Scripca Date: 8/3/2011 10:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Cyent!
  1. Date: 4/19/2011 1:50:00 PM

    Iolanda. This is my first exposure to your poetry-one of the best tankas ever! Saving this emotion-packed write to my favorites! Congrats-keep on 'writing. Gwendolen

  1. Date: 4/10/2011 10:15:00 AM

    Hi Iolanda-So much expressed in so few words.Sad yet beautiful and a worthy winner.Congratulations.Love June(Sylvia)

  1. Date: 3/31/2011 3:30:00 PM

    Congrats Iolanda on being one of the winners in the Poetry Soup contest. Vince

  1. Date: 3/31/2011 5:26:00 AM

    Many congrats on your WIN! dear Iolanda. I knew it was a winner the first time I read it. Elaine

  1. Date: 3/30/2011 1:45:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win in the international contest~~

  1. Date: 3/30/2011 10:33:00 AM

    Dear Iolanda, Congratulations on your amazing 3rd Place win in PS's Intl. Contest! I am truly happy for you, but not surprised as you are one of the best here on Soup! Love, Annalise

  1. Date: 3/30/2011 6:11:00 AM

    Congratulations on your 3rd place win in the PoetrySoup International Poetry Contest Iolanda. I enjoyed reading your poem again this morning. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/29/2011 6:50:00 PM

    Congratulations Iolanda on your big win in the Soups contest. A great honor and your poem is delightful. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 3/29/2011 3:44:00 AM

    Heart wrenching Tanka, Iolanda. Many congrats on this feature of the week. Elaine

  1. Date: 3/28/2011 3:21:00 PM

    Congratulations on your poem on tsunami being featured this week, Iolanda

  1. Date: 3/28/2011 5:51:00 AM

    Congratulations on your well deserved featured poem this week Iolanda. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/26/2011 10:33:00 PM

    wonderful and how nice you have two in the finals still!

  1. Date: 3/8/2011 2:02:00 AM

    congrats!

  1. Date: 9/14/2010 8:37:00 AM

    oh wow, this is just wonderfully descriptive, Iolanda :) beautiful, beautiful write -- Congrats on your win -- nikko :)

  1. Date: 9/1/2010 2:11:00 PM

    Really, really like the flow of this and I was completely in love with your last line! Congratulations on your win!

  1. Date: 8/30/2010 6:23:00 PM

    I love the originality of this one!! Well done, Iolanda!! Congratulations! ~ Carrie

  1. Date: 8/30/2010 5:20:00 PM

    Congratulations on the win in the contest, Iolanda

  1. Date: 8/30/2010 1:48:00 PM

    Many congratulations Iolanda on your win in Rick's fine contest with this super Tanka >> James

  1. Date: 8/30/2010 4:47:00 AM

    Congratulations Iolanda on your win in Rick Parise's contest "A Memory Of Beauty". Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/29/2010 9:24:00 PM

    Iolanda, I already mentioned below how impressed I am with this Tanka. So now I am dropping by to offer congratulations as well! Personally, I was mesmerized by this one~Chris

  1. Date: 8/29/2010 8:38:00 PM

    very unique. congratulations. Joyce

  1. Date: 8/29/2010 7:27:00 PM

    VEry interesting one, Iolanda. A big congrats to you. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 8/15/2010 10:32:00 AM

    Wow, this is outstanding, Iolanda. I'm so found of the Japanese culture. Beautifully written..Emilia

  1. Date: 8/11/2010 1:01:00 PM

    That reads like a beautiful picture album...Good luck in the contest with this sure winner...Thanks for stopping by and for the prayers that you have sent up and will be sending up over the next few weeks..We will need God's strength and healing to try to get through this..I started on the steroid pack this morn and I can feel the inflammation leaving my body...That combined with the prayers is lifting me higher..Sara

  1. Date: 8/5/2010 10:32:00 PM

    This Tanka is absolutely superb! I enjoy the imagery, details and premise so much. This is a winner for sure~Chris

  1. Date: 8/5/2010 9:08:00 PM

    A nice entry to the contest