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War-Locked with a Poet Destory

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War-Locked with a Poet Destory

Ha!
Warlock of Poetry!
your move will turn you into shamrock!
That girl will beat you down 
and when you beg for her to stop 
the only thing she'll do 
is kick dirt in your face
She will kill all your hope
for ever claiming the title of slam champ
and she WILL have you bow to her
as she has done to many
just do what the rest of them do
Run the hell away!
Failure is the only option 
of which you survive...

Man, your poetry is "odd"
It's plot is non-exsistant 
and your game is un-played
your lust is the only fire you command
and everything else is just wrong
dude, she's going to win...
and if you even think of slamming me
you will be thrown aside
like love letter drafts
in the trash basket
so chill out
and don't get killed
you my warlock friend
are going down!


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  1. Date: 8/7/2010 12:08:00 PM

    Ryan:) So True I Enjoyed Hers way 2 Much. Nice Write*luv~SKAT

  1. Date: 8/5/2010 8:11:00 AM

    wow! seems like we have a lot of slam oops! i mean free verse adversaries out there. like my favorite animated movie AFRO SAMURAI everybody is going after the number one head band. my question is who has the number two. any one wants to challenge me i am game.