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...deafening to us

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...deafening to us

deafening to us
like a tsunami rising
cleaving souls, Silence

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  1. Date: 8/16/2010 7:10:00 PM
    Beautiful

  1. Date: 8/9/2010 6:47:00 AM
    Congratulations Jim on your win in ^Rick Parise's contest "Silence Is Golden". Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/7/2010 9:46:00 PM
    oooh great contrast for this theme! congratulations. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 8/6/2010 9:16:00 AM
    Congrats, Jim. Nice going. Ralph

  1. Date: 8/6/2010 7:37:00 AM
    congrats on your win with this wonderful entry

  1. Date: 8/5/2010 4:52:00 PM
    Congrats on this well deserved win, Jim

  1. Date: 8/5/2010 3:13:00 PM
    This is a fine piece..congrats on your win.BG

  1. Date: 8/5/2010 1:43:00 PM
    The most damaging words can sometimes be the ones we don't say...Congrats on your win Jim, nice imagery.

  1. Date: 8/5/2010 12:43:00 PM
    Jim, Congratulations on your win with this profound haiku. Aloha, Connie

  1. Date: 8/5/2010 11:48:00 AM
    Wonderful Haiku Jim, very powerful the silence in it. Mega congrats with this Gem >> James

  1. Date: 8/5/2010 11:27:00 AM
    Congrats Jim on your big win in Rick's contest with these wonderful words of Haiku..enjoy your win today with luv..

  1. Date: 8/4/2010 12:15:00 PM
    Interesting Haiku..Good luck in the contest with this Silence write...Sara

  1. Date: 8/3/2010 4:16:00 AM
    Hmm...you made me wonder what is deafening? could go alot of ways!

  1. Date: 8/3/2010 12:37:00 AM
    strong haiku, enjoyed reading

  1. Date: 8/3/2010 12:36:00 AM
    A Very DeeP Image here of suffering. I think enjoyed.~SKAT