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TRUE LOVE

.           True love 

I love the way you make me love you
Love the way you step my heart on the ground.
When you walk into the room
I love the way you do not even look at me.
You take my breath away
With all the words you say,
I fell in love with you more 
The day you walked out the door.
I love how strong you became
I love the way you always hang up the phone. 
I can't get enough of you 
When you want me out of your face.
True love came to me all of a sudden 
When you dumped me in our special place.

I take my self back into your arms,
only when I am asleep.
I know I brought your heart a little harm.
Now the boat has turned making my love weep.
You do not bother with my charm
All you do is give me the cold shoulder.
In my book of love, you will get over it soon
In the mean time you are my true love
No matter if I have to do it all by myself.
Until than I will not give you the pleasure
Of forgetting  what you gave up.
Stop teaching me the lesson of pay back
Stop playing hard to get,
My one and only TRUE LOVE
 
.          SKAT

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  1. Date: 4/29/2013 2:45:00 AM

    Skat, you are a great poet. Your works are intriguing. I salute you!

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 3:24:00 AM

    What a novelty portrait of true love here...Well done Skat.

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 10:12:00 PM

    Sooo love this too! ;)) Thank you so much for sharing my dearest Skat! One of my favs! Thank you so much! take care and big sweetest hugs! love always and 4ever, Leonora

  1. Date: 10/25/2011 1:21:00 PM

    Smile, *^_^* “I Love This Poem for Many Different Reasons & I Am Quite Certain Your Beauty Is One of They * My Dear Precious & Priceless, Blessed & Beautiful *Skat! *^_^* Sometimes You Can Touch Anothers Spirit of Feel Its Twining Unto Your Own & Amid Their Words, Sweet Melodies Arise *^_^* Keep Brushing Beauty Such As This Which Matches Your Beauties Very Own!” === My Love, Always, Jasper *

  1. Date: 5/26/2011 4:00:00 PM

    * Ps. * “Smile * I Had to Return Because Amid The Joy * I Somehow Forgot to Fave * These Two Jewels of Such Beauty. * Luv * Sarah” *

  1. Date: 5/26/2011 3:41:00 PM

    * “Tis Sooo Very Beautiful When One Finds Themselves Entwined * Amid The Verse of Such Beautiful Light. * When Their Heartful Words Rise & Make Their Place * Inside Your Very Own * Tis Like Just Heaven Sometimes * Dear Beautiful Skat ~ * Sooo Glad Your Beauty Came By * What A Joy. * Two Beautiful Faves to Claim Their Crown. * Hugs & Kissses * Kissses & Hugs * Always & Forever * Sarah” *

  1. Date: 1/10/2011 3:24:00 PM

    I Love it, very passionate and sweet at the same time. Real good job.

  1. Date: 10/15/2010 5:10:00 PM

    Thanks for your sweet comment today> Luv, andrea

  1. Date: 10/14/2010 7:46:00 AM

    Wow I love this one. You captured the tue essence of love. Nice one Girlfriend

  1. Date: 8/28/2010 7:37:00 AM

    wow. interesting one. Really this is true love

  1. Date: 8/26/2010 9:56:00 PM

    Such sadness. Loved the way you have formed the sentences. Thanks for your kind comments.

  1. Date: 8/19/2010 4:54:00 PM

    very niice words showing a sweet vulnerability!..thanks for stopping by and sharing your kind words!

  1. Date: 8/14/2010 11:15:00 AM

    ohhhh whooaa lol wait a sec mom, I'm reading between the lines, you think your so clever don't you lol , this is about me isn't it lol well I can't help it haha, =(^.^)=Royal

  1. Date: 8/14/2010 11:11:00 AM

    such a lovely write:), lol cute ending "stop playing hard to get", =(^.^)=Royal

  1. Date: 8/14/2010 10:15:00 AM

    i love your work to and keep that beast of burden called truth hungry

  1. Date: 8/13/2010 2:28:00 AM

    I love your perspective on love. It is what makes your Poery so Unique. I was so happy to hear from you. Thank You so much.

  1. Date: 8/12/2010 8:47:00 AM

    Interesting way of presenting the one-sided love or men who hate women and the women that love them...Good job..Thanks for selecting my work as a winner in your great contest..I appreciate you giving me the honor..Sara

  1. Date: 8/12/2010 8:16:00 AM

    Very nice...Jimmy

  1. Date: 8/10/2010 7:11:00 PM

    Wonderful poem of a true love from the heart.

  1. Date: 8/8/2010 10:54:00 AM

    Hey! This dude don't know who he be messin' with. I have my money on that charming poet, SKAT. Love,Dave

  1. Date: 8/7/2010 11:15:00 AM

    Oozing beautiful emotions S.K.A.T. a most lovely read >> James

  1. Date: 8/6/2010 2:59:00 PM

    hey skitty Skat,... nice,..p.d.

  1. Date: 8/5/2010 12:06:00 AM

    so sweet, & true with your honesty, im all in it with you to stop the payback! it can be tireing& sooo unecessary after a point in time, you know. & im glad you like attack of the empty fuse, i can see how its like your writing & style.loll ~Always&Forever Lynnie(:

  1. Date: 8/4/2010 6:12:00 PM

    HI, again, Skat!! thanks for dropping by, sweet as ever you are. lUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 8/4/2010 7:29:00 AM

    This expresses thge love/hate obsession rather well, I think. It has the tension in it that give the lines some juice. Thank you as always, Gerard.

  1. Date: 8/4/2010 1:12:00 AM

    the title says it all, only then as one reads it, it gets better. love it awesome. Harry

  1. Date: 8/4/2010 12:30:00 AM

    Hi Skat :) Always happy to read a new write from you :) -- this one is really good, I liked how you made this into such a contrast, must be true love indeed-- keep writing ok? & thanks for all your comments, and I must say-- you are way too cool too ^_^!! ;) enjoy the rest of your week :) -- nikko :)

  1. Date: 8/3/2010 11:10:00 PM

    Hey this is great, Irma. ARe there some bumps right now? It really does sound like true love. REally nice poem. I just came on real quick to get in that one contest and now I am outta here again. BAd back pain lately. Luv ya, Andrea

  1. Date: 8/3/2010 11:06:00 PM

    Very clever way to show the two sides of a love/hate relationship. Enjoyed reading. Hope you have a great day! Scarlett

  1. Date: 8/3/2010 8:19:00 PM

    I could relate to this poem and it is kind of comical the way you wrote it. Kind of a love/hate relationship. I enjoyed reading it.

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