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Hillside Memories

Upon the velvet hillside
and in the breeze that swirled,
I gazed down on the valley
and lavender unfurled.

I felt you deep inside me,
you stirred me with sweet song
along my spine a trickle like 
a brooklet skips along.

Your fragrant spice within my breast
that teased my senses raw,
your touch cooled ancient burning
like mystic springtime thaw.

The whispered call of love’s voice,
the ache of distance mourn;
upon this velvet hillside,
your memory I’ve borne.

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  1. Date: 9/13/2010 6:39:00 PM

    lovely and beautiful, enjoyed ! I also see many congratulations on your poem.Well deserved, have a wonderful one,..LeeAnn

  1. Date: 9/1/2010 5:57:00 PM

    Congratulations to you, i read it too late...it's b'ful more like a misty, blurry painting. Regards, Rinki.

  1. Date: 8/20/2010 8:25:00 AM

    another winning write...TAH

  1. Date: 8/17/2010 6:47:00 AM

    Just stopping by to remind you of my newest contest The Birds And The Bees. I hope you will enter the contest if you haven't already Kris. Thank you if you have already entered or plan on entering. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/10/2010 11:56:00 AM

    I had to stop back and thank you for your kind comments Kris. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/10/2010 2:26:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win this beautiful poem. On returning to read it again, I think I like it even more. Thank you for all your lovely comments. I hope you have some more of your superb poetry to share soon ~ Sharon :)

  1. Date: 8/6/2010 7:02:00 AM

    Many congratulations Kris on your win in Carol's fine contest with this lovely poetry >> James

  1. Date: 8/5/2010 6:44:00 PM

    TKhis is a refreshing, sweet poem. Congratulations on your placement. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 8/5/2010 5:30:00 PM

    Congrats on the win, Kris

  1. Date: 8/5/2010 4:57:00 PM

    Kris Congratulations on your success in contest, Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 8/5/2010 1:37:00 PM

    Congrats Kris on your winning poem in Carol's contest with this fabulous write and super win today.. enjoy your moment in the winners circle ..with luv..

  1. Date: 8/5/2010 1:25:00 PM

    Congratulations on your placement in my contest Kris. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/5/2010 12:04:00 PM

    just beautiful . . . thx too for your wonderful comments . . .think the dawns control is "leaving it all behind" regards, daniel

  1. Date: 8/4/2010 1:40:00 AM

    Such a beautiful and sensual write! -- nikko :)

  1. Date: 8/2/2010 5:00:00 AM

    Very passionate and romantic that also has great rhythm and rhyme...Easy to read..Welcome to soup ...May your stay be long with many more writes like this great one and you receive joy from the reading of others' work..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara

  1. Date: 8/2/2010 2:52:00 AM

    Stunningly beautiful Kris! The flow is easy and light, the words and feelings intense. Loved it. One for my favs ~ Sharon :)

  1. Date: 8/1/2010 7:49:00 PM

    This is just really beautiful Kris, that is all I can say. Have a lovely day(or night if you are in the U.S). Andrea

  1. Date: 8/1/2010 6:55:00 PM

    sensual write..enjoyed