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Control this Domain

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Control this Domain

As we lay down our heads,
the darkness fills my sight,
thinking, dreaming, wishing, wanting,
for everything to turn out right,
Hope fills me as fantasys block reality,
dont want to wake up
from this beautiful nightmare,
i control this domain,
the feel, the power,
gets stronger as i get hungry for more,
kicking, screaming, pleading to stay,
light floods my vision,
Back into reality i awake.

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  1. Date: 8/2/2010 8:53:00 AM
    I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Britt. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/1/2010 10:09:00 PM
    Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed your creative write tonight.. looking forward to many more.. with luv..