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How We Was

I wish we were still close, 
Our relationship's destroyed,
My heart aches for you in sorrow,
I remember when we both smiled,
When we spoke the same words,
When i had problems of my own,
Knowing i had no one to run to,
Other than talk to my mind,
Fear was written all over me ,
Laying at night,
Wishing i still had you,
Crying never made it better,
Being told somethink looked to be playing my mind,
Feeling crushed and thrown away on a desert island alone,
Felt gulity,demolished,
There i was no where to be noticed or found in that dark dull enviroment lost,


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  1. Date: 9/21/2010 11:53:00 AM

    Hi, I liked your nice & painful thoughts.

  1. Date: 8/3/2010 5:21:00 PM

    Wow excellent poem. Welcome to the soup

  1. Date: 8/1/2010 12:49:00 PM

    Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight..looking forward to many more.. with luv..