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River

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River

Oh river's surging pulse
you are an art
of nature's outburst,
How you show God's wisdom
reflected in your flowing freedom
You are relentlessly streaming
while beings within you are thriving
You are worth the praise
more than any man-made sacraments
for your flow is nourishing
and your rhythm 
is far more revitalizing
than the sermon's sting

The moon above your wife
is teased by your sensual murmurs at night
And intoxicated by like the sight
of streaming liquors-
spitting ecstatic moans
every time you made love with her
inside the wilderness of the forest
in the stillness of the night.

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  1. Date: 8/15/2010 7:20:00 PM
    enjoyed reading today!!

  1. Date: 8/11/2010 12:26:00 PM
    Creative perspective for an interesting view. Nice use of personification. Keep on writing. Thank you for your kind comments. Karen

  1. Date: 7/29/2010 7:15:00 AM
    This is extremely beautiful,I love the way the river makes love to the moon,passionate indeed Juan!Celene!

  1. Date: 7/27/2010 9:49:00 PM
    Very enjoyable poem. Speaks of the innocence of nature and I get a sense of provision from reading this, that somehow one does not need more than a certain connection to rivers, nights, moons.

  1. Date: 7/27/2010 7:36:00 AM
    I enjoyed reading your newest poem today Juan. I want to thank you for your kind comments on my poetry. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/27/2010 4:05:00 AM
    Very senual and passionate write..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

  1. Date: 7/26/2010 9:43:00 PM
    You added in some strong personification, to give the already wonderful premise, even better details. Really enjoyed reading this poem~Chris

  1. Date: 7/26/2010 7:30:00 PM
    Lovely imagery with this poem about the river. I did one like this too! Very nice, Jaun! Luv,Andrea

  1. Date: 7/25/2010 8:38:00 AM
    Very nice imagery, Juan! Enjoyed reading it today afternoon! And thank you for your kind comments!...Gert

  1. Date: 7/24/2010 10:08:00 PM
    Nice expressions on ... The moon above you wife....

  1. Date: 7/24/2010 9:38:00 PM
    nice one, enjoyed

  1. Date: 7/24/2010 8:44:00 PM
    NICE WRITE, ENJOYED THE READ -SKAT