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...red devil of life

red devil of life
sow the tightness of large deaths
chaos' asking





*A take off on D.G's ...green Angel of death.*

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  1. Aces- Avatar
    SKAT Aces-
    Date: 8/11/2010 5:37:00 PM
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    Congrats! On your poem..the title has me reading it again. TY* LUV~SKAT
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    Rick Parise
    Date: 7/30/2010 3:12:00 PM
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    Congrats to you!!!Hurray~Rick
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 7/30/2010 12:39:00 PM
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    Cool Take off!! congratulations. LUv, Andrea
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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 7/30/2010 5:20:00 AM
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    Congratulations Jim on your win in Deborah Guzzi's contest "Critcise Me". Love, Carol
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    john freeman
    Date: 7/29/2010 10:18:00 PM
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    Congratulations, on your 6th place. agape, Moses
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    Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 7/29/2010 10:15:00 AM
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    Dear Jim gald to see a haiku such as yours. Might you please just for the contest note at the bottom of your verse..which verse of mine you are working with or from..I think it's ...green angel of death but to be consistant put that on the bottom * A take off on D.G's ...green Angel of death..Thanks so much judging is today!
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    harry horsman
    Date: 7/25/2010 7:37:00 AM
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    intresting read, love it. Harry
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    SKAT Aces-
    Date: 7/24/2010 6:18:00 PM
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    DEVILISH LOL, LIKED THIS HAIKU - SKAT
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 7/24/2010 6:08:00 PM
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    Interesting..Sara
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    Dr.Ram Mehta
    Date: 7/24/2010 5:39:00 PM
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    Nice criticism and good luck in the contest
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    Jim David
    Date: 7/24/2010 4:57:00 PM
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    Deb, I made this opposite haiku in response to your contest... it was fun and surprisingly challenging to find antonyms within the meter. "chaos' " was a real hard one to quantify, as no counter likes to deal with posession well... hope you like it!!!! p.s.... I THRIVE ON CRITICISM.....everyone else, grow another layer or 2 of skin.... deb helped me write a better poem on the gulf with her observations!