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...red devil of life

red devil of life
sow the tightness of large deaths
chaos' asking





*A take off on D.G's ...green Angel of death.*






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  1. Date: 8/11/2010 5:37:00 PM
    Congrats! On your poem..the title has me reading it again. TY* LUV~SKAT

  1. Date: 7/30/2010 3:12:00 PM
    Congrats to you!!!Hurray~Rick

  1. Date: 7/30/2010 12:39:00 PM
    Cool Take off!! congratulations. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 7/30/2010 5:20:00 AM
    Congratulations Jim on your win in Deborah Guzzi's contest "Critcise Me". Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/29/2010 10:18:00 PM
    Congratulations, on your 6th place. agape, Moses

  1. Date: 7/29/2010 10:15:00 AM
    Dear Jim gald to see a haiku such as yours. Might you please just for the contest note at the bottom of your verse..which verse of mine you are working with or from..I think it's ...green angel of death but to be consistant put that on the bottom * A take off on D.G's ...green Angel of death..Thanks so much judging is today!

  1. Date: 7/25/2010 7:37:00 AM
    intresting read, love it. Harry

  1. Date: 7/24/2010 6:18:00 PM
    DEVILISH LOL, LIKED THIS HAIKU - SKAT

  1. Date: 7/24/2010 6:08:00 PM
    Interesting..Sara

  1. Date: 7/24/2010 5:39:00 PM
    Nice criticism and good luck in the contest

  1. Date: 7/24/2010 4:57:00 PM
    Deb, I made this opposite haiku in response to your contest... it was fun and surprisingly challenging to find antonyms within the meter. "chaos' " was a real hard one to quantify, as no counter likes to deal with posession well... hope you like it!!!! p.s.... I THRIVE ON CRITICISM.....everyone else, grow another layer or 2 of skin.... deb helped me write a better poem on the gulf with her observations!