DEVIL'S HIDDEN RANCH by SKAT Aces-

DEVIL'S HIDDEN RANCH

DEVIL'S HIDDEN RANCH Where the dogs growl Gunshots! Dead cow! Horse shoe upon death Tequila in a full cup Salt of cocaine Sad face! Guitar string! Bandit near the door Wife on the floor Four horses! No forgiveness Hallucinations Losing the big love in life Yelling her name He's gone insane Loaded gun! Life is done Far and near Ending his own fear The road under the sun A coward in his path Responding to the Devil's wrath In a Hidden Ranch in Mexico!!!!!! S.K.A.T. Dedicated to my Babe! ;-)


SuZ - D Date: 6/14/2013 11:18:00 AM Taken on a fantasy ride to a place I'd never find without your imagination. What fun. SuZ
SCRIBE ML Date: 1/22/2013 2:03:00 PM Sound like one of my hangouts or my neighbor. A gangsta's life is full of excitement, believe me I know. Perfectly written. Thanks for stopping by!
julie heckman Date: 1/1/2011 9:30:00 AM I really enjoyed reading "Devils Hidden Ranch" I can't help relating to it in some darker parts of my life. Good emotional and vivid poem!
daver austin Date: 8/14/2010 11:06:00 AM How about writing us a conemplation, S.K.A.T. I think you would have a super one. Love, Dave
daver austin Date: 8/2/2010 8:52:00 AM This would make a fine modern movie - how about Clint Eastwood. I will have to read this one a few more times. LOve, Dave
kristi hayner Date: 8/1/2010 2:34:00 PM Very cool! Love the dark and unknown!
Lynette Chachere Date: 7/31/2010 6:46:00 PM um, this is interesting(: wow, sounds like a "hell" of a ride. i like the creativity, Irma ~Always&Forever Lynette
Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/30/2010 11:20:00 PM oops, thought this was a new one too. But I have seen this one. WEll, goodnight, sweet Irma, and thanks for reading four of my poems today. LUv,Andrea
Doris Culverhouse Date: 7/29/2010 6:49:00 PM sounds scary...take care!
xin liu Date: 7/28/2010 4:40:00 PM different. i like how you tell a story here
Kevin Semeniuk Date: 7/27/2010 10:27:00 PM great poem!!..
Gert W. Knop Date: 7/27/2010 6:20:00 AM Love the title and the write, Irma! Thanks for your comments and have agreat week!...Hugs...Gert
Elaine George Date: 7/26/2010 3:39:00 PM Wow!!!! Powerful in all aspects. Thank you for sharing, Skat. Lainie
David Byrne Date: 7/25/2010 7:59:00 PM Love the title!
Tirzah Conway Date: 7/25/2010 12:25:00 PM Wonderfully dark poem, Irma-Right up my alley!~Tirzah~
Christopher Flaherty Date: 7/25/2010 11:24:00 AM Hi Skat Thank you very much for taking the time to read my poems and commenting , much appreciated. Cool poem i like it , its very creative and different from the norm , good work Cheers
Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/25/2010 10:17:00 AM So your babe must like cowbody western movies??? This was a really fun read, Irma. Nice to see a new poem from you and thanks for commenting to my blog, sweetie. Luv, Andrea
binibining P.iNk Date: 7/24/2010 9:32:00 PM Hi Skat :) Wow what a story! Short lines but it comes across as so alive and descriptive--enjoyed this very much!! -- nikko :)
Joyce Johnson Date: 7/24/2010 8:15:00 PM Wow! This is very chillingly descriptive. Thanks for your comments on my little limerick. Love, Joyce
Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 7/24/2010 5:55:00 PM Nice write. I enjoyed it
Poet Destroyer A Date: 7/24/2010 3:37:00 PM the dedication sounds for real,later,..p.d.
Linda-Marie SweetHeart Date: 7/24/2010 2:09:00 PM Wow what a story SKAT my BBF Irma.. enjoyed this tragic tale but what great rhyme u have instilled in the write.. very creative.. hope not true though..haha.. enjoyed.. good luck with your awesome contest .. Slam Bam thank u M'am.. with luv.. your BBF...

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