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DEVIL'S HIDDEN RANCH

DEVIL'S HIDDEN RANCH

Where the dogs growl
Gunshots!
Dead cow!
Horse shoe upon death
Tequila in a full cup
Salt of cocaine
Sad face!
Guitar string!
Bandit near the door
Wife on the floor
Four horses!
No forgiveness
Hallucinations
Losing the big love in life
Yelling her name
He's gone insane
Loaded gun!
Life is done
Far and near
Ending his own fear
The road under the sun
A coward in his path
Responding to the Devil's wrath
In a Hidden Ranch in Mexico!!!!!!
         S.K.A.T.

Dedicated to my Babe! ;-)

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  1. Date: 1/22/2013 2:03:00 PM

    Sound like one of my hangouts or my neighbor. A gangsta's life is full of excitement, believe me I know. Perfectly written. Thanks for stopping by!

  1. Date: 1/1/2011 9:30:00 AM

    I really enjoyed reading "Devils Hidden Ranch" I can't help relating to it in some darker parts of my life. Good emotional and vivid poem!

  1. Date: 8/14/2010 11:06:00 AM

    How about writing us a conemplation, S.K.A.T. I think you would have a super one. Love, Dave

  1. Date: 8/2/2010 8:52:00 AM

    This would make a fine modern movie - how about Clint Eastwood. I will have to read this one a few more times. LOve, Dave

  1. Date: 8/1/2010 2:34:00 PM

    Very cool! Love the dark and unknown!

  1. Date: 7/31/2010 6:46:00 PM

    um, this is interesting(: wow, sounds like a "hell" of a ride. i like the creativity, Irma ~Always&Forever Lynette

  1. Date: 7/30/2010 11:20:00 PM

    oops, thought this was a new one too. But I have seen this one. WEll, goodnight, sweet Irma, and thanks for reading four of my poems today. LUv,Andrea

  1. Date: 7/29/2010 6:49:00 PM

    sounds scary...take care!

  1. Date: 7/28/2010 4:40:00 PM

    different. i like how you tell a story here

  1. Date: 7/27/2010 10:27:00 PM

    great poem!!..

  1. Date: 7/27/2010 6:20:00 AM

    Love the title and the write, Irma! Thanks for your comments and have agreat week!...Hugs...Gert

  1. Date: 7/26/2010 3:39:00 PM

    Wow!!!! Powerful in all aspects. Thank you for sharing, Skat. Lainie

  1. Date: 7/25/2010 7:59:00 PM

    Love the title!

  1. Date: 7/25/2010 12:25:00 PM

    Wonderfully dark poem, Irma-Right up my alley!~Tirzah~

  1. Date: 7/25/2010 11:24:00 AM

    Hi Skat Thank you very much for taking the time to read my poems and commenting , much appreciated. Cool poem i like it , its very creative and different from the norm , good work Cheers

  1. Date: 7/25/2010 10:17:00 AM

    So your babe must like cowbody western movies??? This was a really fun read, Irma. Nice to see a new poem from you and thanks for commenting to my blog, sweetie. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 7/24/2010 9:32:00 PM

    Hi Skat :) Wow what a story! Short lines but it comes across as so alive and descriptive--enjoyed this very much!! -- nikko :)

  1. Date: 7/24/2010 8:15:00 PM

    Wow! This is very chillingly descriptive. Thanks for your comments on my little limerick. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 7/24/2010 5:55:00 PM

    Nice write. I enjoyed it

  1. Date: 7/24/2010 3:37:00 PM

    the dedication sounds for real,later,..p.d.

  1. Date: 7/24/2010 2:09:00 PM

    Wow what a story SKAT my BBF Irma.. enjoyed this tragic tale but what great rhyme u have instilled in the write.. very creative.. hope not true though..haha.. enjoyed.. good luck with your awesome contest .. Slam Bam thank u M'am.. with luv.. your BBF...