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Devil's Hidden Ranch

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Devil's Hidden Ranch

DEVIL'S HIDDEN RANCH

Coyote howl, dogs growl
Gunshots, dead cow
Red barn left unlock
Horse shoe upon death's door
Tequila in a cup
Salt of cocaine, shadows of insanity
Guitar string, sad song
Bandit near the door, wife on the floor
Hallucinating---Reality
Yelling out her name, he's gone insane
Loaded gun, life is done
Far and near ending his intoxicating fear
The road under the sun
A coward in his path
Responding to the Devil's wrath

In a Hidden Ranch in Mexico!!!!!!
       
:)   SKAT

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  1. Date: 10/2/2014 4:02:00 PM
    SKAT A . . . I was checking out your poetry here from the past. This write is quite interesting and intriguing. The imagery you used here is quite enchanting and captures the reader's attention at once!! This would not be a very nice ranch to visit. Most Excellent Write!! Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary

  1. Date: 5/29/2014 11:37:00 AM
    Nice work capturing the frantic mood with stunted lines and descriptive words. Have a good day and God bless!

  1. Date: 4/14/2014 4:36:00 AM
    nice art, well articulated...the 'o' sound throughout adds to the dark meaning of the poem...Allan....

  1. Date: 11/7/2013 11:30:00 PM
    SKAT, very startling poem, nicely told

  1. Date: 7/24/2013 10:54:00 PM
    this is a sad tale not for the man but the woman lost in devils land

  1. Date: 6/14/2013 11:18:00 AM
    Taken on a fantasy ride to a place I'd never find without your imagination. What fun. SuZ

  1. Date: 1/1/2011 9:30:00 AM
    I really enjoyed reading "Devils Hidden Ranch" I can't help relating to it in some darker parts of my life. Good emotional and vivid poem!

  1. Date: 8/14/2010 11:06:00 AM
    How about writing us a conemplation, S.K.A.T. I think you would have a super one. Love, Dave

  1. Date: 8/2/2010 8:52:00 AM
    This would make a fine modern movie - how about Clint Eastwood. I will have to read this one a few more times. LOve, Dave

  1. Date: 8/1/2010 2:34:00 PM
    Very cool! Love the dark and unknown!

  1. Date: 7/31/2010 6:46:00 PM
    um, this is interesting(: wow, sounds like a "hell" of a ride. i like the creativity, Irma ~Always&Forever Lynette

  1. Date: 7/30/2010 11:20:00 PM
    oops, thought this was a new one too. But I have seen this one. WEll, goodnight, sweet Irma, and thanks for reading four of my poems today. LUv,Andrea

  1. Date: 7/29/2010 6:49:00 PM
    sounds scary...take care!

  1. Date: 7/28/2010 4:40:00 PM
    different. i like how you tell a story here

  1. Date: 7/27/2010 10:27:00 PM
    great poem!!..

  1. Date: 7/27/2010 6:20:00 AM
    Love the title and the write, Irma! Thanks for your comments and have agreat week!...Hugs...Gert

  1. Date: 7/26/2010 3:39:00 PM
    Wow!!!! Powerful in all aspects. Thank you for sharing, Skat. Lainie

  1. Date: 7/25/2010 7:59:00 PM
    Love the title!

  1. Date: 7/25/2010 12:25:00 PM
    Wonderfully dark poem, Irma-Right up my alley!~Tirzah~

  1. Date: 7/25/2010 11:24:00 AM
    Hi Skat Thank you very much for taking the time to read my poems and commenting , much appreciated. Cool poem i like it , its very creative and different from the norm , good work Cheers

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