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NIght and Day

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NIght and Day

Night 
Dark, peaceful
Sleeping, lightening, loving
Moon, stars, sun, light
Shining, energy giving, chirping
People, noise
Day

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                Vrushani!!!

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  1. Date: 10/27/2010 6:23:00 PM
    good one but the shape is not there... should be a diamond shape. I think... if you put a period on the top right and then space bar the words over it should center them.

    thaker Avatar vrushani thaker
    Date: 10/14/2012 7:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thnks for putting light on it...i will improve
  1. Date: 7/26/2010 3:57:00 PM
    Vey difficult form, Vrushani. You have mastered it effortlessly. Well done! Lainie

    thaker Avatar vrushani thaker
    Date: 10/14/2012 7:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thnks.....but i have nt yet mastered.....hv to do lot more.....but thnks again for the boost...
  1. Date: 7/23/2010 11:21:00 PM
    This is so cute. So how old are you, little girl?

    thaker Avatar vrushani thaker
    Date: 10/14/2012 7:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    dat time i was 18 yrs old....now 20 yrs....n thnksssssss alot...