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Broken

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Broken

Nothing is bright and pretty.
Everything seem dark and ugly.
I don't see anything worth busting my back for..anymore.
Always alone now.
Maybe it's best this way.
I'll just bring someone down.
Like a toy not quite working right,
I'm broken..without you.
Nothing is right with me,
without my second breath.
Life is dark without my star.
Hopefully one day to be fixed,
Untill then I'll be left broken.

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  1. Date: 7/22/2010 9:28:00 AM
    I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Nioma. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/22/2010 7:31:00 AM
    nice...deep n meaningful

  1. Date: 7/21/2010 2:32:00 PM
    Wow your write is deep and a bit sad, all bad has a bright side, enjoyed your write...P.D.

  1. Date: 7/21/2010 2:27:00 PM
    Welcome to Poetry Soup Family.. so enjoyed reading your very creative write tonight.. with luv..