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"You Lied To Me"

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"You Lied To Me"

Liar, run, run
Falling, burn, burn
Discomfort, i did't told you to live
Spit on my face, i want you dead
Reduce to ashes, you better blow it all away
Chained down to hell, set me free
Gone to sleep, just shoot in my head
Pull the trigger, pull the trigger
You coward
You've gone too far
Bless me god, i can take you down now
Hate me forever, eternity will not save you
Liar, i want you dead
Hater, your gonna hate me more
Lying to me, better spit on my face
Candles, are place in line for your welcome

So long i waited
So far has gone
I know i made the mistake to let you live one more night
Still i breath
Not long before dead
Wait one more
One more night of survival

Long distant screams
Can you hear it?
Is you child's mercy
I don't care how much i do
Is my last line
I will slice my blade on him
Blood splatters the wall
The wall my name is placed on
Mercy for dead i may not ever have
Eyes of god have seen worst these days
Don't tell me im dead
I fell more alive killing your creation
Jail's broke loose
I can see you suffer deep inside
This streets will never tell how to survive
You exposed the child to my hands
Run, run away
No were to hide anyways

So long i waited
So far has gone
I know i made the mistake to let you live one more night
Still i breath
Not long before dead
Wait one more
One more night of survival

I can feel your hate
To me and will always be me
Because i took the step no one else did before
Crushing you dream's with axe and hammer
Your mind is weak
I took down your defenses
No were to hide and no were to run
Run, run
There's no were to hide
Hide, hide
There's no were to run
Twist it sideways
Still the same story
Make me cry
You wont ever see me sad

So long i waited
So far has gone
I know i made the mistake to let you live one more night
Still i breath
Not long before dead
Wait one more
One more night of survival
The more we wait
The better will be
For me indeed
I can see you smile
The day we married
The pact we made
Real forever
And dead tonight...

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  1. Date: 4/7/2013 1:42:00 PM
    Beauty of an emotional filled poem

  1. Date: 4/6/2013 9:40:00 PM
    Derek, stopping by to read this poem once again, it is a xool and awesome poem. Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-). Have yourself a good one. Always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 7/22/2010 7:06:00 AM
    Awesome men i read it and i was thinking damn u could write a song for avenged XD ta brutal

  1. Date: 7/21/2010 1:06:00 PM
    Wow deep write, enjoyed this one...P.D.

  1. Date: 7/21/2010 11:59:00 AM
    Here I sit with lots to do,....... but.......I would rather read poetry written by you. Wishing you a day filled with inspiration Derek. Love, Carol