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IT'S NOTHING

It's Nothing

In my head
Underneath my bed
It's in the rain
They call me a code red
I am labeled INSANE
He loves me he said
I'm out of my mind
Doctor I need my med
Can't go back and rewind
WHY WAS I MISLEAD?
WHY YOU LEFT ME BEHIND?
Everything you said I misread..
Man love is blind
I've completely lost my mind
WHY IS IT SO HARD TO FIND?
WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO ME?
What you did to me is so unkind
It's so unkind
HOW COULD YOU LET  THIS BE?
I may be crazy!!
Very crazy they say..
Seeing me kick myself everyday
You where never real !!
You where never real !!

I stare at the wall
I stand so still
I lose it cause you don't call
Without you I have no will.
Rocking myself side to side
Pulling my hair saying it's not real, 
it's not real !!
Remember with my eyes open wide 
How you took me up that hill
You bounce me like a ball
Than you told me we needed to chill
Than you let me fall
My heart stopped and stood still
My heart yet has not broke.
IS THIS A JOKE?
It's not for real.
These feelings I can not hide
I still love him so I see no big deal
It's the sane part of me that has died.
I tell you his love for me is real.
His love for me is real.......!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
          I.T.
S.K.A.T. POETRY
     10-11-04

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  1. Date: 2/3/2011 4:28:00 AM

    I've known 2 men who made me feel this way [sigh] the first one I so "loved?" I considered suicide when he broke it off with me, the 2nd one I had the strength to ask to leave...I'm not sure "we/human beings" really know what we want? or they meaning we have for love? All I know is I'm not sure feeling so strongingly about someone you loose yourself is a good idea/or even healthy? "You bounce me like a ball" you need to do more of this..this is a metaphor & a GREAT ONE! Light & Love

  1. Date: 7/31/2010 6:55:00 PM

    btw, sm reply.(:

  1. Date: 7/31/2010 6:43:00 PM

    your repeated line "its so unkind" is a powerful line. you may be crazy, but the most "crazy" ppl, know the truth.and if you really put that into thought, you'll see this is true. your emotion says it all, he has to be only hiding his true feelings for you. but it's only "right" for him to take some kind of revenge on you for something..right? and when he's done, either he will speak, or he stays silent.i do hope he speaks. .for you both ~Always&Forever Lynette

  1. Date: 7/30/2010 11:06:00 AM

    Very emotional heart touching lines. After reading the poem I found that it is based on a true happening. And thank you for your precious comments on my Poem Patradoot my friend. Love best wishes always......Ravindra.........SKAT

  1. Date: 7/25/2010 11:02:00 AM

    hot stuff.. im right there right now

  1. Date: 7/24/2010 11:58:00 PM

    Wow, intense. This poem reminded of a short story called Nona which plays with a remotely similar theme. Every capitalized word rings in my head. Thanks a lot for sharing.

  1. Date: 7/24/2010 12:10:00 PM

    love can be endless torment making anyone go bonkers really good write cheers my friend gonzo

  1. Date: 7/23/2010 1:55:00 PM

    very intriguing indeed.

  1. Date: 7/23/2010 4:19:00 AM

    love the drama that takes place here...great write!

  1. Date: 7/22/2010 6:36:00 PM

    very interesting poem!

  1. Date: 7/22/2010 8:33:00 AM

    Some say there's a fine line between insanity and insanity; Normal and abnormal. A lost love is enough to put anyone off the deep end. love, Susan

  1. Date: 7/22/2010 5:20:00 AM

    Thank you Irma also for commenting my Aphorism! Your comments are always helpful! Have a great day....Gert

  1. Date: 7/22/2010 4:38:00 AM

    What happened to you also happened to me when my former finacé had left me many years ago without saying anything or even giving a reason. And we had been together for seven years! Enjoyed this poem of yours today, Irma! And thank you for your well understood comment on "Todtnauberg". Have a nice day!...Gert

  1. Date: 7/22/2010 4:35:00 AM

    oh wow, Irma this sure is packed with emotion! Can definitely feel it right up to that last line of yours! Hope this isn't based on life though-- nonetheless a very gripping write as always! -- nikko :)

  1. Date: 7/21/2010 4:36:00 PM

    Mum's the word, born a heart breaker. P.J.

  1. Date: 7/21/2010 10:52:00 AM

    Here I sit with lots to do,....... but.......I would rather read poetry written by you. Wishing you a day filled with inspiration SKAT. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/21/2010 6:17:00 AM

    Irma, maybe you are not getting my soupmail. I could not read the one you just sent me the other day. It came out really weird. I hope it was not anything important? Thanks for commenting to my blog the other day about movies. How many do you see a week? LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 7/21/2010 3:24:00 AM

    Hope just a topic and not life....If life, hang in there ...Writing about it will help by letting it flow outward and not be harbored inward..Thanks for stopping by and commentng on my work ..my slam..Sara

  1. Date: 7/21/2010 12:39:00 AM

    it so sad to read these poem S.K.A.T, lovely to read, but to have to wear the feeling instigated here is a tragedy, yet i look at the comments here. you have heaps of friends i for one. Harry

  1. Date: 7/20/2010 11:12:00 PM

    I felt what caroline has said ... I have struggled with this for 8yrs and now have just broke up with a man who was not worthy and its so true we depend on us for happiness Be happy my SKAT ... Its hard but our life is like a poem we decideing on the out come sarah xx

  1. Date: 7/20/2010 9:55:00 PM

    Very emotional write, expressing torment inside and insecurities. I feel that you need to strengthen yourself. Don't depend on others for your happiness, Skat, find it inside you. That way love will naturally flow. I say this because I have been there and your poem here made me thing of that. Thank you for sharing so honestly. Caroline.

  1. Date: 7/20/2010 9:41:00 PM

    that song crazy, crazy, and crazy goes through my mind as i see and know,,lol,,i love this one ,,yeah..p.d.

  1. Date: 7/20/2010 8:54:00 PM

    My BBF SKAT this piece is a phenomenal classic poetic write... awesome and amazing from an amazing lady.. speechless at the vibrancy with which u constructed this poem.. a treasure my friend.. and so happy u liked my entry for the SLAM contest u are sponsoring.. it gave us all a chance to vent it out.. and I am in awe that poets like my write.. thankxxx BBF from BBF ...always.. with luv..

  1. Date: 7/20/2010 8:46:00 PM

    Good poem! Also thank you(=

  1. Date: 7/20/2010 8:42:00 PM

    Irma, your soup mail did not post to me correctly and I could only catch half of what you were saying.Anyway, I need to get upstairs. I am physcially exhausted right now, my eyes hardly staying open. LUv ya, Andrea

  1. Date: 7/20/2010 7:59:00 PM

    Hey Irma, I love this piece, simply for the fact that it hits home, can so relate to it.. Btw, you asked about my name? You're right, I use to use my real name, which is Wilma Neels, decided to change it to my nickname lol

  1. Date: 7/20/2010 7:59:00 PM

    Wonderful Poem! I have felt insane for thinking someone loved me when he clearly didn't - It's not just you!~Tirzah~

  1. Date: 7/20/2010 7:56:00 PM

    Sounds like total confusion and chronic delusion and I have come to the conclusion, it's amour! But with a different perspective if you change your directive and be more objective and say, "Hit the door!" Love ya and your poem Skat!

  1. Date: 7/20/2010 7:36:00 PM

    Interesting... Unfornatunately, I've been that guy before. Maybe. Well... Probably definitely when I was a lot younger, but that hurts because I know how I made somebody feel. NOBODY should be mislead. Sorry everybody! Yeah, P.D. ought to be nervous. I wasn't going to enter that one only because I have a lot more to say . I just wrote that to make sure that's what a slam was. I'm new to this. I don't know the different forms of poetry I just write. Thanks L.L.

  1. Date: 7/20/2010 6:57:00 PM

    Hey great to see a new post here, Irma. I noticed you posting lotsa blogs too. That was awesome to see you over there. I enjoyed this one and the repitition of the "real" lines. makes it very real sounding indeed. Luv ya, Andrea

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