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Love You

You said don't look at me that way,
never knowing I loved you night and day,
no matter how you laid me out, or said i hate you
you abortion from hell,
The love I felt for you was more then any one could ever tell
and from the welts of my daddy's belt
was all the love you could have dealt
picking up the ash tray throwng it at
me like I'm the enemy, making my life ebony
filled with dark deception
I don't think those were your intentions,
my love for you deeper then the core of the earth,
why do you hate me? you gave me birth
all I wanted was your warm embrace
all you gave me was a bruise on my face
choking the life out of me, why do you hit me this way
I need the tears to not wet the innocence off my face
then your coffee cup stained my lace
mom please I love you don't make me leave I want to stay
I get on my knees and pray
but the demons inside her scared my saints away
those demons drag me away, the fear you gave
made me no longer a child at mind, this is what you made for being unkind
I no longer can cry, and let me tell you I try
don't need to dry my eyes, you put neither God or the devil
at my side, I made my own kingdom I pray when I hide
I want these demons to let go of my thighs, don't you realize all these 
beatings makes them know you don't care, so they come and visit me at night
this hatred grows when they try to put it inside, I've become numb
and you could care less, I can see it in your eyes you want me dead
All I want is your love, but that image only lives in my head
love you mom wish you were'nt dead.

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  1. Date: 8/21/2010 12:20:00 PM
    thank you for your comments and i hope all you wonderful poets keep reading my writes as i will continue to read yours, when i read my mail and seen that my poem made it in the TWIST and SHOCK contest it felt like a happy birthday thank you again mua much love and blessings

  1. Date: 8/16/2010 10:45:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Rose. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/15/2010 7:02:00 PM
    Congrats on your poem being featured this week..P.D.

  1. Date: 8/15/2010 2:02:00 PM
    Congrats on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great piece to share with us all..with luv..

  1. Date: 8/14/2010 9:13:00 AM
    Congratulations Rose on your win in Nikko Palmario's contest "Twist and SHOCK" Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/8/2010 8:46:00 AM
    Many congratulations Rose Diana on your win in Nikko's fine contest >> James

  1. Date: 8/7/2010 9:46:00 PM
    Congrats on your win,

  1. Date: 8/7/2010 12:20:00 PM
    Congrats on your winning poem in the Twist and Shock contest.. an awesome write and super win for u to enjoy today..with luv..

  1. Date: 8/7/2010 10:15:00 AM
    This was really sad and painful, Rose-- how I hope this isn't based on your life-- congrats nonetheless for being among my winners! -- keep writing! -- nikko :)

  1. Date: 7/22/2010 10:32:00 AM
    deep, and spoken with the right words Diana, another poem where Jesus wil look out for you regardless. Enjoyed,..p.d.

  1. Date: 7/21/2010 3:54:00 AM
    well said and written, powerful pen you have.. Always Michael

  1. Date: 7/19/2010 1:19:00 PM
    so much suffering, so sorry about the pain. Soon there will be no more tears in this world (Revelation 21:3,4)

  1. Date: 7/18/2010 3:39:00 PM
    So enjoyed your creative write tonight.. and LUV in all forms is grand.. as your write .. enjoyed ..with luv..