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Slytraps Revenge!

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Slytraps Revenge!

There were some rude people from Slytrap
who only new how to write mean crap,
so on they all squiggled,
and manically giggled,
while Shakespearian fops took cat naps.

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  1. Date: 7/20/2010 3:33:00 PM
    you are right about getting the meter right on these limericks it is difficult.

  1. Date: 7/20/2010 3:32:00 PM
    funny write!! congrats on your win!!

  1. Date: 7/20/2010 12:51:00 PM
    Many congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest Deborah with this fine Limerick >> James

  1. Date: 7/19/2010 11:19:00 AM
    Congratulations Deb on your well deserved win in Carolyn Devonshire's contest "Anti-Slam Limericks". Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/18/2010 7:32:00 PM
    How original and unique TEACH.. if for the contest ..good luck... my entry is ZIP IT... and thankxxx so very much for my 2nd place win in your numbers contest...it was a joy to create this entry for u as fives are so big in my life and always have been...my engagement was even on the 15th of July..WoW... and if not for traveling time our wedding would be Aug. 15th rather than the 22nd.. go figure> anyway.. the 22nd of every month is always fantastic for me.. so am looking forward to that day..

  1. Date: 7/18/2010 6:51:00 PM
    ps. if the stupid narrative part had gone thru , you could know that the list of things represented pop culture, and those things shaped not only my year and influenced the baby boomers but also shaped me as well. Deb, I hope you start paying attention to what I am saying. Good grief, what am I to with you!!!

  1. Date: 7/18/2010 6:48:00 PM
    geeez, Deb. I even explained it out in front of the poem. GRRRRR on you. hahaha

  1. Date: 7/17/2010 7:02:00 PM
    Soup Mail too, Cher! - Tim

  1. Date: 7/17/2010 3:09:00 PM
    LOL not too much rhymes with crap??? :p

  1. Date: 7/17/2010 3:04:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win..Glad you thought of it...Sara

  1. Date: 7/17/2010 2:55:00 PM
    Congratulations, Deb. Funny name slytrap! Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 7/17/2010 2:33:00 PM
    Yep...Knew this was a winner first time I read it, Cher...guess this old fop gonna' take a cat nap too..wake me when it's over - Tim

  1. Date: 7/17/2010 1:51:00 PM
    Congratulations Deb., on your HM in Carolyn's contest with this witty poem. Very nice! Lovingly, Dane Ann PS I tried to call you...busy, busy, busy! XOXOX

  1. Date: 7/17/2010 1:27:00 PM
    Smart one Deb. Congratulation in success in contest. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 7/17/2010 1:09:00 PM
    Well done, Deborah. The last line is a kicker. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 7/17/2010 12:27:00 PM
    good write, good luck in the contest

  1. Date: 7/17/2010 11:52:00 AM
    LOL Deb., Good luck in the contest! Now, enter a slam to the slammers in the slam contest...the poetry soup support way! They can dish it out and I've heard they can take it, too. I can't though. Have a super day. This is good. Love, Dane