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Sounds in shades

I bleed I bleed
- no pain you felt
I cried I cried
- no tears you melt.

I smiled I smiled
- no charm you shade
I whispered I whispered
- no thought you made.

I bleed I smiled
- no spunk you ensured
I cried I whispered
- no words you composed.

I waited I waited
-no trauma you pored
I misled I misled
- no storm you foretold.

I bided I bided
- no shadow you cajoled
I hoped I hoped
- no fortune you assured.

I waited I bided
- no hands you waved
I missed I hoped
- no faith you devoted.

I bleed I bleed
- no pain you felt
I cried I cried
- no tears you melt.

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  1. Date: 7/16/2010 5:49:00 PM

    Wow, I like the rewording,, very strong write,, enjoyed this one..P.D.

  1. Date: 7/16/2010 1:51:00 PM

    I love this! excellent Thanks for sharing - Jodie Q