BARE WITH ME by SKAT Aces-

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 5/27/2013 9:27:00 PM

Lovely poem Skat,i really enjoyed this.Thanks for inviting me on your poem page.I have posted one called the enchanted day...do enjoy my second post here.

Richard D Seal

Date: 5/7/2013 7:15:00 PM

Lots of people get their bear/bares mixed up, it can add a whole new dimension to bear loving lol. Thanks for your comment Skat, Take care, Richard

persian khushi

Date: 4/19/2013 3:18:00 PM

this is a super write. enjoyed reading.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/2/2011 5:58:00 AM

While stopping by to read some of your amazing poetry I would like to thank you for your comments on my poetry. Your words are always appreciated ~SKAT~. May the sun always shine down upon you and fill your soul with inspiration. Love, Carol

Jamila Strong

Date: 9/22/2010 6:14:00 PM

I'VE WRITTEN SOMETHING SIMILAR VERY GOOD, I ALSO LIKE RHYTHM IT HAS TO IT

anthony beesley

Date: 8/7/2010 11:15:00 AM

sexy and seductive write also cutting sharp and to the point

Lynette Chachere

Date: 7/31/2010 6:35:00 PM

this is actually very sweet. but two wrongs never make it right. besides that, this is true, if the true love is still genuine, then all should be forgiven and the love in time will be stronger. ~Always&Forever Lynette

shannon farlouis

Date: 7/27/2010 3:44:00 PM

You couldn't have said it any better than that. Excellent write.

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 7/22/2010 12:51:00 PM

I would like to see this on film. This might have something of Billy Wilder or Ingmar Bergmann to it in a claustrophobic way. Tit for tat ( Pun intended.) Regards, Gerard.

john freeman

Date: 7/21/2010 12:40:00 PM

Skat, a lot of he said, she said, going on in a lot of beds, this will continue until all of humanity is dead. Now that all of that is said;___ My desire in life as I have often said, is to always seek to find points of agreement instead, and not to focus on minor points of disagreements that are dead. If I've offended, please accept my apologies instead, as we approach unto life from the dead. Agape, Moses

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 7/20/2010 9:47:00 PM

Yeah, I understood that. :) Well written poem. There's heaviness in his heart and in her heart. I hope your wish will come true. With love, anything is possible, but 2 is needed. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind comments on mine. Caroline.

matt T. love

Date: 7/20/2010 5:26:00 PM

I"m pretty sure I've been there a time or two. Sometimes the truth is too much for people to bare...-

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/20/2010 7:00:00 AM

He said, she said......it seems that the differences will always be.!! Great poem, Skat!!! ps....just discovered my placement in your Newsbreak contest!! Thanks so much...I am late getting some of the contest results, but so appreciate your picks.!! Thanks again for choosing mine!! :)

Gert W. Knop

Date: 7/19/2010 7:50:00 AM

Well written, a good one, SKAT!!! Thank you for commenting "Future Dreams" and have a great week! Take care!....Gert

David Byrne

Date: 7/18/2010 4:48:00 PM

The power people have over people! Good write!

Timothy Brumley

Date: 7/18/2010 4:03:00 PM

Skat, Hmmm, is that the same skat that would say this and that, and rat a tat tat like tit for tat, and always knew where it was at, in my comment box?:) Yikes! Two wrongs never make a right and seldom does a marriage survive two death blows, so there's the paradox. Truth is, the first mistake was his, then the second was yours, for not divorcing the weasel while it was on him! :)

Linda-Marie SweetHeart

Date: 7/16/2010 12:41:00 PM

BRAVO.. a great one SKAT.. like the new name ..I officially changed mine too.. awesome..sisters in name changes too.. with luv.. happy weekend..

harry horsman

Date: 7/15/2010 9:39:00 PM

excellent poem, very intense. Harry

Wilma Neels

Date: 7/15/2010 5:50:00 AM

The truth brings about forgiveness.. the desire to be forgiven is brought across excellently in this piece.. Thank you for your comment on "green-eyed monster" tc WNN

binibining P.iNk

Date: 7/15/2010 1:58:00 AM

yay a new write from you-- sorry I missed this earlier :)-- really like how you say it like it is-- forgiveness should definitely be in the equation in any relationship (well that's what I think, but then maybe sometimes enough is enough, depends actually on the situation ...) I enjoyed that last stanza of your especially- hope you can come up with more of these poems of yours! Enjoy your week -- nikko :)

daver austin

Date: 7/14/2010 2:49:00 PM

Actually, the thing should go like this. "I will love you as long as I live.' 'Marry me quick then, you fool!" "Hey! Dis be da hereafter." Love, Dave

daver austin

Date: 7/14/2010 2:46:00 PM

Have you heard? "I will love you forever." "Marry me then." "Hey! Dis be da hereafter. Love your way of putting words together. Love, Dave

Celene Crescent

Date: 7/14/2010 9:45:00 AM

Its give and take,we all make mistakes..its love and forgive. .great poetry Irma,Celene!

Royal Trevino

Date: 7/13/2010 6:25:00 PM

Hi fellow souperXD, Well what goes around comes around, you should put all that aside and bare with eachother being that the two of you should learn from experience, love, =(^.^)=Royal

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/13/2010 4:48:00 PM

Little play on words ....Needs to fix him a little poached salmon with a special sauce with syrup of ipecac to let him feel like the dog that he is for cheating on her...Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/13/2010 7:16:00 AM

What a blessing we have in PoetrySoup. A place to come to write and read and make new friends along the ink trail. I am wishing you a day full of inspiration. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and hope to read many more written by you in the future SKAT. Love, Carol

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