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BARE WITH ME

Bare with Me

He said she said
While making love in bed
I will always love you
No matter what I do.
Would you die for me..
Forever we will be.

Trust me 
forgive me.
Now I understand
It won't happen again
Sorry that I made you cry
Give me another try.

My mistake
You can't take
I see regret in your eye
Loving me is that a lie.
Already apologize.
Did not recognized

On my  knees 
Begging please
Do not leave me.
I did not see.
My dirty deed
Bare with me

I'm sorry a thousand times.
So please forgive me.
The way I forgave you
When you had your love affair 
I bared with you now, 
Bare with me.

**HE SAID SHE SAID**
           
           SKAT
P.S. when I'm using the word 
       BARE as the naked truth 
       Bear not to put up with.
               LOL

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  1. Date: 5/7/2013 7:15:00 PM

    Lots of people get their bear/bares mixed up, it can add a whole new dimension to bear loving lol. Thanks for your comment Skat, Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 4/20/2013 12:51:00 AM

    Beautiful <3

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 3:18:00 PM

    this is a super write. enjoyed reading.

  1. Date: 6/2/2011 5:58:00 AM

    While stopping by to read some of your amazing poetry I would like to thank you for your comments on my poetry. Your words are always appreciated ~SKAT~. May the sun always shine down upon you and fill your soul with inspiration. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/22/2010 6:14:00 PM

    I'VE WRITTEN SOMETHING SIMILAR VERY GOOD, I ALSO LIKE RHYTHM IT HAS TO IT

  1. Date: 8/14/2010 9:27:00 PM

    Sensual way of baring the soul.

  1. Date: 8/7/2010 11:15:00 AM

    sexy and seductive write also cutting sharp and to the point

  1. Date: 7/31/2010 6:35:00 PM

    this is actually very sweet. but two wrongs never make it right. besides that, this is true, if the true love is still genuine, then all should be forgiven and the love in time will be stronger. ~Always&Forever Lynette

  1. Date: 7/27/2010 3:44:00 PM

    You couldn't have said it any better than that. Excellent write.

  1. Date: 7/22/2010 12:51:00 PM

    I would like to see this on film. This might have something of Billy Wilder or Ingmar Bergmann to it in a claustrophobic way. Tit for tat ( Pun intended.) Regards, Gerard.

  1. Date: 7/21/2010 10:08:00 PM

    Good one Skat. Love, Lainie

  1. Date: 7/21/2010 12:40:00 PM

    Skat, a lot of he said, she said, going on in a lot of beds, this will continue until all of humanity is dead. Now that all of that is said;___ My desire in life as I have often said, is to always seek to find points of agreement instead, and not to focus on minor points of disagreements that are dead. If I've offended, please accept my apologies instead, as we approach unto life from the dead. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 7/20/2010 11:52:00 PM

    This is sad, I can relate!

  1. Date: 7/20/2010 9:47:00 PM

    Yeah, I understood that. :) Well written poem. There's heaviness in his heart and in her heart. I hope your wish will come true. With love, anything is possible, but 2 is needed. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind comments on mine. Caroline.

  1. Date: 7/20/2010 5:26:00 PM

    I"m pretty sure I've been there a time or two. Sometimes the truth is too much for people to bare...-

  1. Date: 7/20/2010 7:00:00 AM

    He said, she said......it seems that the differences will always be.!! Great poem, Skat!!! ps....just discovered my placement in your Newsbreak contest!! Thanks so much...I am late getting some of the contest results, but so appreciate your picks.!! Thanks again for choosing mine!! :)

  1. Date: 7/19/2010 7:50:00 AM

    Well written, a good one, SKAT!!! Thank you for commenting "Future Dreams" and have a great week! Take care!....Gert

  1. Date: 7/18/2010 4:48:00 PM

    The power people have over people! Good write!

  1. Date: 7/18/2010 4:03:00 PM

    Skat, Hmmm, is that the same skat that would say this and that, and rat a tat tat like tit for tat, and always knew where it was at, in my comment box?:) Yikes! Two wrongs never make a right and seldom does a marriage survive two death blows, so there's the paradox. Truth is, the first mistake was his, then the second was yours, for not divorcing the weasel while it was on him! :)

  1. Date: 7/16/2010 12:41:00 PM

    BRAVO.. a great one SKAT.. like the new name ..I officially changed mine too.. awesome..sisters in name changes too.. with luv.. happy weekend..

  1. Date: 7/15/2010 9:39:00 PM

    excellent poem, very intense. Harry

  1. Date: 7/15/2010 5:50:00 AM

    The truth brings about forgiveness.. the desire to be forgiven is brought across excellently in this piece.. Thank you for your comment on "green-eyed monster" tc WNN

  1. Date: 7/15/2010 1:58:00 AM

    yay a new write from you-- sorry I missed this earlier :)-- really like how you say it like it is-- forgiveness should definitely be in the equation in any relationship (well that's what I think, but then maybe sometimes enough is enough, depends actually on the situation ...) I enjoyed that last stanza of your especially- hope you can come up with more of these poems of yours! Enjoy your week -- nikko :)

  1. Date: 7/14/2010 2:49:00 PM

    Actually, the thing should go like this. "I will love you as long as I live.' 'Marry me quick then, you fool!" "Hey! Dis be da hereafter." Love, Dave

  1. Date: 7/14/2010 2:46:00 PM

    Have you heard? "I will love you forever." "Marry me then." "Hey! Dis be da hereafter. Love your way of putting words together. Love, Dave

  1. Date: 7/14/2010 9:45:00 AM

    Its give and take,we all make mistakes..its love and forgive. .great poetry Irma,Celene!

  1. Date: 7/13/2010 6:25:00 PM

    Hi fellow souperXD, Well what goes around comes around, you should put all that aside and bare with eachother being that the two of you should learn from experience, love, =(^.^)=Royal

  1. Date: 7/13/2010 4:48:00 PM

    Little play on words ....Needs to fix him a little poached salmon with a special sauce with syrup of ipecac to let him feel like the dog that he is for cheating on her...Sara

  1. Date: 7/13/2010 7:16:00 AM

    What a blessing we have in PoetrySoup. A place to come to write and read and make new friends along the ink trail. I am wishing you a day full of inspiration. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and hope to read many more written by you in the future SKAT. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/12/2010 7:56:00 PM

    he said she said,,it goes both way,..lol,..enjoyed,..p.d.

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