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Bare and Naked

Bare with Me

He said, she said
While making love in bed
I will always love you
No matter what I do.
Would you die for me..
Forever we will be.

Trust me, Forgive me.
Now I understand
It won't happen again
Sorry that I made you cry
Give me another try.

My mistake
You can't take
I see regret in your eye
Loving me is that a lie.
Already apologize.
Did not recognized

On my  knees 
Begging please
Do not leave me
I did not see
My dirty deed
Bare with me

I'm sorry a thousand times.
So please forgive me.
The way I forgave you
When you had your love affair 
I bored with you now, 
Bare with me.

**HE SAID SHE SAID**
           
           SKAT
P.S.  As bare as the naked truth 
     

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  1. Date: 3/13/2014 9:38:00 PM

    It's the only way to do it in bed with a partner. You describe it well in this piece.

  1. Date: 1/12/2014 5:32:00 AM

    Wonderful per excellent job. Your ink will not dry.

  1. Date: 12/26/2013 1:50:00 PM

    Skat this is an excellent piece of work. I just picked it out randomly and I love it. Keep up the excellent job.

  1. Date: 12/18/2013 2:39:00 AM

    Skat, a very good piece of work, good flow….David

  1. Date: 11/6/2013 12:24:00 AM

    A great poem!

  1. Date: 10/17/2013 11:32:00 PM

    SKAT This is a powerful piece. Very seductive and provocative in a deep way. Nice job

  1. Date: 7/17/2013 3:59:00 PM

    really good poem. it was beautifully written. :))

  1. Date: 6/24/2013 7:27:00 AM

    Well done, I enjoyed this piece.

  1. Date: 5/27/2013 9:27:00 PM

    Lovely poem Skat,i really enjoyed this.Thanks for inviting me on your poem page.I have posted one called the enchanted day...do enjoy my second post here.

  1. Date: 5/7/2013 7:15:00 PM

    Lots of people get their bear/bares mixed up, it can add a whole new dimension to bear loving lol. Thanks for your comment Skat, Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 4/20/2013 12:51:00 AM

    Beautiful <3

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 3:18:00 PM

    this is a super write. enjoyed reading.

  1. Date: 6/2/2011 5:58:00 AM

    While stopping by to read some of your amazing poetry I would like to thank you for your comments on my poetry. Your words are always appreciated ~SKAT~. May the sun always shine down upon you and fill your soul with inspiration. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/16/2010 6:40:00 PM

    Why wouldn't I forgive you? I am naked and waiting already!

  1. Date: 9/22/2010 6:14:00 PM

    I'VE WRITTEN SOMETHING SIMILAR VERY GOOD, I ALSO LIKE RHYTHM IT HAS TO IT

  1. Date: 8/14/2010 9:27:00 PM

    Sensual way of baring the soul.

  1. Date: 8/7/2010 11:15:00 AM

    sexy and seductive write also cutting sharp and to the point

  1. Date: 7/31/2010 6:35:00 PM

    this is actually very sweet. but two wrongs never make it right. besides that, this is true, if the true love is still genuine, then all should be forgiven and the love in time will be stronger. ~Always&Forever Lynette

  1. Date: 7/27/2010 3:44:00 PM

    You couldn't have said it any better than that. Excellent write.

  1. Date: 7/22/2010 12:51:00 PM

    I would like to see this on film. This might have something of Billy Wilder or Ingmar Bergmann to it in a claustrophobic way. Tit for tat ( Pun intended.) Regards, Gerard.

  1. Date: 7/21/2010 10:08:00 PM

    Good one Skat. Love, Lainie

  1. Date: 7/21/2010 12:40:00 PM

    Skat, a lot of he said, she said, going on in a lot of beds, this will continue until all of humanity is dead. Now that all of that is said;___ My desire in life as I have often said, is to always seek to find points of agreement instead, and not to focus on minor points of disagreements that are dead. If I've offended, please accept my apologies instead, as we approach unto life from the dead. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 7/20/2010 11:52:00 PM

    This is sad, I can relate!

  1. Date: 7/20/2010 9:47:00 PM

    Yeah, I understood that. :) Well written poem. There's heaviness in his heart and in her heart. I hope your wish will come true. With love, anything is possible, but 2 is needed. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind comments on mine. Caroline.

  1. Date: 7/20/2010 5:26:00 PM

    I"m pretty sure I've been there a time or two. Sometimes the truth is too much for people to bare...-

  1. Date: 7/20/2010 7:00:00 AM

    He said, she said......it seems that the differences will always be.!! Great poem, Skat!!! ps....just discovered my placement in your Newsbreak contest!! Thanks so much...I am late getting some of the contest results, but so appreciate your picks.!! Thanks again for choosing mine!! :)

  1. Date: 7/19/2010 7:50:00 AM

    Well written, a good one, SKAT!!! Thank you for commenting "Future Dreams" and have a great week! Take care!....Gert

  1. Date: 7/18/2010 4:48:00 PM

    The power people have over people! Good write!

  1. Date: 7/18/2010 4:03:00 PM

    Skat, Hmmm, is that the same skat that would say this and that, and rat a tat tat like tit for tat, and always knew where it was at, in my comment box?:) Yikes! Two wrongs never make a right and seldom does a marriage survive two death blows, so there's the paradox. Truth is, the first mistake was his, then the second was yours, for not divorcing the weasel while it was on him! :)

  1. Date: 7/16/2010 12:41:00 PM

    BRAVO.. a great one SKAT.. like the new name ..I officially changed mine too.. awesome..sisters in name changes too.. with luv.. happy weekend..

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