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Empty Bottle

Taking me down 
To the fields of green
Along the brightest star
I've ever seen
Wait by the water
Till it hits the shore
To find an empty bottle
Nothing more



Name: Scarlett Sepulvado Anderson
Written: July 12, 2010
Contest: The Unwritten

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  1. Neels Avatar
    Wilma Neels
    Date: 7/3/2011 7:39:00 AM
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    Scarlett, congratulations on your win in Brian's contest ;-)

    Sepulvado Anderson Avatar Scarlett Sepulvado Anderson Date: 7/3/2011 12:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much Wilma. I'm pleasantly surprised. I dont get to communicate with you guys as much cuz my computer is down. It was so great to hear from my old friends here at poetrysoup.
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    Linda-Marie SweetHeart
    Date: 7/3/2011 4:58:00 AM
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    Congrats Scarlett on your second place win with this intense poetry..how have u been luv? hope u are celebrating the 4th in style...with luv..

    Sepulvado Anderson Avatar Scarlett Sepulvado Anderson Date: 7/3/2011 12:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hello Ms Sweetheart - thank you for your kind comments. Been doing ok but am in the hospital right now. They have wi-fi woohoo! :) Getting my computer fixed soon so I can get back to my old friends here at poetrysoup. Hope your weekend is a great one!
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    Gert W. Knop
    Date: 7/18/2010 9:33:00 AM
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    Lovely written, enjoyed the reado today! Carry on with your good job! And thanks for your kind commenton "Roadside" I also posted it on my facebook album with a photo!...Have a nice week!...Gert
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    James Fraser
    Date: 7/13/2010 3:14:00 PM
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    An empty bottle with no story to tell, where it came from, where has it been. Poetry at it's best Scarlett >> James
  1. Neels Avatar
    Wilma Neels
    Date: 7/13/2010 5:24:00 AM
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    I enjoyed this write, especially the visuals you have created, enjoy your day Wilma
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    Doris Culverhouse
    Date: 7/13/2010 5:07:00 AM
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    inspired me to see a new poem for today! thanks!!
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    Tyler Jones
    Date: 7/12/2010 6:55:00 PM
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    great poem, it projected great imagery for me, optimisticaly

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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 7/12/2010 6:36:00 PM
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    I'm with Boy Toy here, Kool write!

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    b boy
    Date: 7/12/2010 6:30:00 PM
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    kool write! b. boy
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    rinki nandy
    Date: 7/12/2010 6:01:00 PM
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    you have provided the reader with the authority to decide! n i admire that idea....giving every reader an opprtunity to think! n thanks much for your encouragng remarks on smiley..GOd bless.
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    Chris D. Aechtner
    Date: 7/12/2010 5:52:00 PM
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    This is pretty neat. Not sure which way to interpret your poem, which actually makes it more enjoyable for me~Chris


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